[Denied] my application

[richard858 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: richard858

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes and i agree whit the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: about rasicm and sexisem

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:that you play a role what you wnat like a orc warrior or a elf slave and that you be it if you are IC

What is metagaming?:metagaming is about strategie how you wnat do get to the top or be the most fearsome villian

What is powergaming?: powergaming is that you play storybased and that it is choiches related like a good choices let you se like a hero and a bad choices like a villian

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Bugharz

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:orc

Character’s age:25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):i was born in a fearsome clan called clan darkskin they where strong smart and had good strategie but after a attack of humans we had to leave and run i lost sign of all of the clan members and i was raised since then by a human but her childeren where always mean to my but now i wil let them se that they wil fear my

Personality Traits:

Ambitions:to rais a new clan and make it a fearsome one or join a new clan

Strengths/Talents:i am good whit swords i learned it at the clan i can mine also beceaus of the human famelly

Weaknesses/Inabilities:arrows i hate them they are pointy and deatly as long as i keep away form archer is it ok and im also a bad woodcutter

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): im like 1,85 tall and 75kg i am pretty strong and i always wear my armour

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Edited October 18, 2015 by richard858

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

(1)

Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please correct them using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

(2)

Your biography is too short but if you follow the next two points you should be able to expand on it:

 

(2a)

Please add server lore to your biography. Just like Game of Thrones of Skyrim, Lord of the Craft has its own lore, setting and history. In order to show you understand the universe that we're currently set in you will have to include some lore in your biography.

 

(2b)

Please include more important events in your characters life which have moulded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age. Explain your character in detail.

 

(3)

Please improve the overall literacy of this app, make sure to double check all your work. Spelling and punctuation are key!

 

(4)

Please add some personality traits! Are you ferocious, kind, funny, playful?

 

(5)

Your weakness isn't really a weakness, a weakness would be something like scared of spider or can't swim. Everyone is hurt by arrows!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.