[Denied] Character App

[Altmeri 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Altmeri

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cyber-bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I googled "minecraft 1.8.8 rpg servers"

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a character that is not you

What is metagaming?: Using information gained out of character in RP's

What is powergaming?: Making your character OP

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Elidon

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 26

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Elidon grew up on an island far away, roughly about 2 weeks.. He was never an exciting child, as he spent most of his time studying and reading. As a result of this Elidon was the smartest in his village. 2 days after his 20th birthday, he was walking down a street when attacked by a thug. The thug held up two heads: his mothers and fathers. The thug swung at him but missed and got the blade stuck in a beam. Elidon grabbed the blade and chopped the thugs head clean off. Elidon was arrested and was sentenced to 2 years. He escaped after 1. 

After escaping, he decide to lay low and start a new life.  He changed his name from Torgy to Elidon. He never takes his hood down and acts offended if asked to. About 2 months ago he decide to travel to Athera. He got on a ship and started to sail. About a week and a half in to the journey his boat sank leaving him as the only survivor. He swam to a nearby island and stayed there for 2 years. He then spotted a boat and ran to get on board. The captain refused to let him on, so Elidon killed him. He tied up the crew and sailed to Athera. 1 day beore he arrived he killed what was left of the crew. He treats his arrival like a new beginning.

Personality Traits: Harsh, loyal, curious

Ambitions: To have a successful life.

Strengths/Talents: Fast, strong, sharp wits. Uses his feminine looks to his advantage

Weaknesses/Inabilities: His paranoia can lead him to be easily distracted. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is 6ft 10" and weighs 450 pounds. He has a blood red robe and green eyes. His face looks like that of a females. He has long blonde hair.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited October 24, 2015 by Altmeri

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

 

(1)

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

Check out our wiki!

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

Remember we're in the realm of Vailor now!

 

(2)

Please expand on your powergaming definition, use this guide to help you:

 

(3)

Tallness, Blonde hair, pale skin and green - blue eyes are traits of High Elves, I would suggest basing you biography and the lore in it around the High Elves and Haelun'or.

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Haelun'or

 

(4)

Make sure your strengths and weaknesses are balanced, yo make sure your character isn't too OP to start.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.