[✔] [Accepted] [Pending][EDITED] Application for entry.REMOVE_KEBAB27 (SECOND ONE)

[Midjagardaz 31]

 

  Out-Of-Character Information
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FIRST APPLICATION:https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/136087-denied-application-for-entryremove_kebab27/#comment-1291418

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:REMOVE_KEBAB27
How old are you?:14 years old.
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I agree with all of them.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Nope.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?From a bunch of friends.

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?:PLaying a game on roles like an actor does in a theatre.
What is metagaming?:When you use the information you got irl to help you in-game.
What is powergaming?:Ignoring the rules of a game and exploiting it so that you become the 'greatest' character on the server. Example:Exploiting the game,disrespecting the rules so that you reach a goal set up in your mind.It usually means that you won't respect role-playing.                                 In-Character  Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name:Jamie Peutrovic.
Character’s sex:Male.
Character’s race:Human.
Character’s age:28
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Jamie was born in the Kingdom of Oren.He had a big sister and two little brothers,his mom died at child birth so his father had to double the work so that he could feed the entire family.They were a poor family so they had been taking a few loans now from the bank.One night,at the age of 14, Jamie woke up he saw his father on the floor covered in blood,his sister gone and his twin brothers killed with ice-cold blood.He only got away from the murderers because he liked to sleep in his 'hidden' place under a big and comfy blanket.He then swore to find the murderers of his family and try to find his sister.He went to Felsen to get training but no one wanted to help him.At one moment when he lost all the hope an old man went to him and asked him why was he crying.He told his story to the old man agreed to help,but when the boy came to train he found out that he will train with the old man's son,and the son agreed to help with one condition , to join the army after he had his revenge.After years of training and hard tests he finally was ready for one final fight.The fight that will show if he was a waste of time or if he was ready for revenge.The old man's son and him fought and fought until the disciple has successfully defeated his master.His master left him to train other for the army.After this, he wandered the streets to find his revenge.At the age of 22 he found someone that knew where the bandits were hiding his sister.He used the secrets of the old man's son and used some plants to mask his face and used the night as cover he bribed the guards to put some sleeping sap in the wine.After a few hours they all fell asleep and he found his sister sleeping after she drank some of the wine.He took her and put her in a safe place in one of his friends house.After this, at the age of 23, when he entered the army,only to find out that his master was an important Officer of the army .                                                                                                                                                           After some time the inevitable happened.The Duke's war.Jamie fought for the barony of Dour Watch for King Oliver de Savoye.The war lasted 4 bloody years of endless battles.They fought against the rebellion started by the Duchy of Adria.He got injured and nearly lost his left arm,he could never use a shield again nor swim the blue deep seas.After he got well he started training others as his fighting days were on the edge.As days passed the rebellion got crushed by the might of the army and Jamie got better.He could now swing the sword just like he could before."A rebellion is just like a mosquito.If you don't crush it,it will become a great danger as the disease spreads around." -Jamie Peutrovic After fighting the rebellion.
Personality Traits:Greedy,selfish.
Ambitions:To be a soldier in the army of Oren to fight for his favorite nobles, the Horens.
Strengths/Talents:Good fighter,good miner,skilled with the sword or axe.
Weaknesses/Inabilities:He doesn't know how to swim and can't handle a shield.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Jamie has a small beard , dark hair and light blue eyes.He likes to wear brown/white clothes and sometimes he mixes them to look like an old fashioned gentleman.He usually doesn't have time to buy new clothes because he is always busy doing business.Height:5,8 feet ,Weight:194 pounds.                                                                                               Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/the-forever-travelling/

 

Edited November 5, 2015 by REMOVE_KEBAB

[Pureimp10 5691]

 

 

- You need at least 3 pieces of lore in your bio, you only have 2.

 

- Your biography needs to be at least 2 paragraphs long.

 

- Your powergaming definition could be expanded upon.

 

You have 24 hours to make the edits I've requested above.

 

Be sure to PM me if you have any questions, or if you've made all the appropriate edits so I can take another look at your application.

 

 

Congratulations! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

[Pureimp10 5691]

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