[Denied] My Application

[Jazmine The Goldenheart 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ShaleighsGaming

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am, but I'll get used to it!

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  The rule that says you can't go back to the roleplay you had before you died in game.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No I do not.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out about this server through youtube and it looks like fun!!!

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting put the part of a person or character

What is metagaming?: Any strategy, action, or method in game which transcends a prescribed ruleset.

What is powergaming?: Is a style of interacting in game.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jazmine The GoldenHeart

Character’s sex: Girl

Character’s race:  Dwarf

Character’s age: 16

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  She doesn't remember much about her childhood parents or siblings. She wakes up in spawn confused and dazed, wondering what happened before. Her memory slowly comes back to her.

Personality Traits: Brave, Caring, Sweet, Smart

Ambitions: She wants to find her family and is destined to find true love.

Strengths/Talents:  She's skillful in the art of combat/

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  She's shy and is insensitive about herself.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Long beautiful brown hair, striped teal and purple shirt, teal shorts, brown shoes, beautiful smile, brown eyes, and a clear complexion

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/8t8mC4U

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

I have found this application to contain content that was copied from an outside source. I have discovered that the metagaming definition was plagiarized and thus I am labeling this application as a plagiarized application. We do not take lightly to un-original work and content, I will thus be leaving you off with a warning and will be instantly denying your application. Please write the definition in your own words.

Your definition of Powergaming is vague, please expand on it by referring to the link here for guidance.

Your character must be over eighteen years old.

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint. -- I understand that your character doesn't know what happened to her, but you as the player should know her life story. She can still have amnesia, but explain how she got it, her life before it, etc.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for Dwarves can be found on the Wiki here! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

The ambition to find true love is slightly cliche, please choose something more original -- finding your parents is fine.

Finally, your application is riddled with what I can only explain as typos, please look through and correct them.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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