Zorac Aldeher

[Zorac 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Zorac56

-How old are you?:

13 but don't hold that against me :D

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Well I am a kid however on many servers I have played on they mistook me for a adult. I enjoy reading and playing video games(I am also trying to write a book.) And I always love to rp I have been playing D&D for about a year but we dont have many people for it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Maybe a hour a day or so(depends on homework really)

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I have been playing minecraft since early alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

As I said above I have been playing D&D for about a year

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think this server will be fun with many great people and hopefully serious Role players

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on a server called "Dawn of Nobility" and I left them for two reasons, the first was that they called themselves a rp server when they where not at all and second I still played because it was fun however they then made it so you had to install a mod pack to play on it and I did not like he mods they selected.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

I have read AND understood the rules and the one part of the lore that confused me is why the daemon still cursed the orc when he did not accept his temptations.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human

Elf

Orc

Dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:

I heard about you through "Reckreationz" youtube channel.

-Did you vote?:

I did indeed vote on all three sites or is it cites?

-What was your favourite Law?:

My favorite law was the no random killing within cities because no one like being killed whilst shopping

-What was your least favourite Law?:

My least favorite law was the law that made theiving a punishable offense unless of course you mean punishible as jail or bounty instead of kick or ban then it would be OK. of course this doesnt pertain to my current Char because he is a Holy warrior that does not break laws.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

"Zorac"

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Zorac Aldeher

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Zorac

-Biography:

Zorac was born under a peasant family who always tried to make him happy. He was a only child and always loved to farm. unfortuanetly for him his father was a cobbler. As he grew up he always did things for himself because his father really wanted him to be a cobbler but Zorac did not want to be one. On his 13 birthday he got a strange urge, He suddenly knew he had to join the church. although his father still wanted him to be a cobbler he respected his sons decision and watched as he practiced swordsmanship and prayed. Finally Zorac set off on his adventure...

-Character Age:

23

-Character Appearance:

Zorac is a strong but thin man with smooth brown eyes and perpetually messy black hair. He is about 5' 6" with smile wrinkles around his eyes and mouth despite his young age.

EDIT: his clothing is quite basic since he does not officially work for the church yet he wears a homeade white shirt with a red cross on them and homeade white pants both of these are rather worn and ragged.

-Character Personality:

Zorac is always ready to laugh or smile but also keeps a cool head in harsh encounters his one weakness is how much he despises undead and opposers of the church he throws away all reason when facing them.

-Your ambitions:

Although new to this world Zorac plans to do many things including becoming a warrior for the church(paladin or sumsuch) and owning his own farm. he wishes to bring honor to his family and always knew he would be a follower of the church.

-Can your character read or write?:

Due to early education Zorac can easily read and write.

-Can your character mine?:

Although not very expeirienced at it Zorac can indeed weild a pick

-Are you a capable builder?

Although he marvels and the massive adn beutiful structures others make Zorac can not make much more than a log cabin. (this was pretty hard to write as I am actually a pretty good builder :D)

-Can you wield a sword?:

Although he never got proffesional training he worked at it enough and practiced since he was young with sticks or anythign he could find he is a skilled fighter with his own style.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Zorac has always dreamt of owning his own farm which would pale the small garden he grew as a child

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Some might call him fighting the undead he hates a "breserker rage"

-A screenshot of your skin:

EDIT: I forgot to mention in case you where wondering I made that skin myself I hope you like that also :D

[NairOG 1]

Your bio has potential. Make it longer and watch on grammar.

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

[Zorac 0]

Ok thank you very much for the feed back I will go back to the drawing board on that bio or maybe not quite to the drawing board a little after that. I like to think I am usually good at writing I was just very exited, and well impatient, so this time it will be a while talk to you later. :D