[Denied] Keeto Kay's Application

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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: KeetoKay
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No pvp logging
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No they all seem fair and understanding
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? YouTube

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be a character either created or has been set out for you to use
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is an out of character action where a player's character makes use of knowledge that the player is aware of but that the character is not meant to be aware of. Metagaming while taking part in relatively competitive games, or those with a more serioust tone, is typically not well received, because a character played by a metagamer does not act in a way that reflects the characters in-game experiences and lore.
What is powergaming?: Powergaming in playing games will take many forms. One type is that the deliberate creation of optimal player characters (PCs), with the aim of increasing the ability the player wields within the game world by means of their avatar. this can be referred to as min-maxing, due to the practice of leveling the PC's skills through increasing fascinating or "powerful" traits whereas minimising underpowered or unuseful traits. Such characters usually draw criticism for not fitting the theme and tone of the game world or for being tough to develop applicable challenges for. Another kind of power-gaming involves a spotlight on getting power throughout game progression, usually by getting powerful equipment or uncommon skills.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Xharlion
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Elf
Character’s age: 19
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Xharlion doesn't have much of an interesting life, his parents died at war, and he was left alone in a dark and gloomy forest, he taught himself most things, but stumbled upon a cottage in the woods. Inside, an exiled orc scholar taught him how to write and read. From then on, he became an expert hunter, swordsman and the art of unseen-movement.
Personality Traits: Sadistic and is a Quick-Learner  
Ambitions: To establish a brotherhood of assassins
Strengths/Talents: Killing,Hunting and Loves to hurt people
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being Nice and Empathising
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Blue Eyes,275cm Tall, Skinny, Blond long hair.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

I have found this application to contain content that was copied from an outside source. I have discovered that the Metagaming and Powergaming definitions were plagiarized and thus I am labeling this application as a plagiarized application. We do not take lightly to un-original work and content, I will thus be leaving you off with a warning and will be instantly denying your application.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for elves can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Elves )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

Please lengthen your Biography out to a longer length. I am looking for around the size of two paragraphs. As an idea incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character’s development to their current standpoint.

The appearance you have described does not follow your racial guidelines. You cannot be 275cm tall as an elf. It is excessive.

Your skin does not match the appearance of your character.

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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