[Denied]darkgaming2015 app

[darkgaming2015 0]

What is your Minecraft Account Name: Darkgaming2015
How old are you ?: 14
You understand that the server is PG-13 (you will not be denied for being under 13 years): yes
Have you read and agree to the rules: yes
What is the rule, do you agree with most: Do not change your username to anything that might be offensive, vulgar, or inflammatory, in any medium LotC.
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft ?: youtube videos
Definitions
What is roleplaying games que ?: work with the creativity of the player pretending to be someone else or at another time.
What is metagaming: is the use of information Obtained out of the game to change Their attitudes Within the game
What is powergaming? It is a game in Which you make progress toward the goal specific
In-Character Information
Character's name: Iohan
Character's fri: male
Character's race: human
Character's age: 22
Biography: Born in a poor village, leaves the world in search of adventure.
Personality Traits: put your wellbeing first, but is always willing to help anyone for the right price
Ambitions: become a monster hunter
Strengths / Talents: agile, stealthy and strong
Weaknesses / inabilities: do not have the mental preparation to kill someone for no good reason
Appearance: average height, 67kg, muscular.

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, your application has been denied for the following reasons:
-Your roleplaying definition is a bit vague.
-Both your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are incorrect.
-Your biography must contain at least two paragraphs. Add more about your life. Where did you live? What was your birth palce like? What happened on your journeys? For more info check our servers wiki page: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
-I advise you improve on your grammar as well, since you seem to have some errors in your writing.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT member for help!
 

[Crowbill 493]

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