dan4president01's whilelist application 2

[Dan4president01 0]

u]Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: dan4president01

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Canada, pacific standard

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Well, in terms of minecraft I play everyday for a couple hours. Roleplaying servers are my favorite type of server, because getting into a character is awesome.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 7 hours at least

-How long have you played minecraft?: 1 year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I've played on a roleplaying server known as thekingdoms. Its a very well known server with lots of people. I've been doing it for about 2 months and have been roleplaying as a knight.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Large, epic and crowded

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: thekingdomsmc.com I left because this server sounds more epic.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes I have read the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server. human, elf, ork, dwarf

-How did you hear about us?: youtube

-Did you vote?: yes

-What was your favourite Law?: always roleplay

-What was your least favourite Law?: didn't have one

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? dan4president01

In-Character:

-Character Name: Eli Lathandril

-What is your Race?: elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: dan4president01

-Biography: Eli, as a child has always been fascinated with music and the playing of instruments. He loves the sound of the elven instruments as well as the harp. Also he has a great interest in writing and recording historical events. If wars happen or a glorious day occurs, he'll never miss it, he'll write it down. His parents are still alive and plan to buy him an elven home when the price is right. Because of his interests in music and writing, he often explores trying to find other peoples work. Sometimes he explores a little to far and finds himself in trouble with other beings. If he had to fight, he would choose his bow over the sword. Close hand combat is to much for a young elf.

-Character Age: 16

-Character Appearance: Sharp eyes, dark eyebrows, straight white hair, thin, 6'1 in height,

-Character Personality: Adventurous, thoughtful, peaceful, Loves history, Smart, Educated

-Your ambitions: To become a full time author, recording all historical events.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes better then most can. It is his passion.

-Can your character mine?: No

-Are you a capable builder? Eli doesn't usually work with his hands.

-Can you wield a sword?: Very poorly. A bow is preferred.

-Enjoy Farming?: We'll if that includes his garden then yes. If not no.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Writing, the playing of instruments.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=1784

-Other Information: Although Eli is a peaceful fellow, he will not let his town be attacked. It is his duty, to defend it against various creatures of the earth.

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-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

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-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

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-Your application was too short.

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