[Denied] Application

[Magic 0]

Wel first no idee what im doing

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: FantasyMagic

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):YES

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: YES

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: ROLEPLAY RULES

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):NO

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?A SERVER LIST

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role

What is powergaming?:is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly

What is metagaming?:s any strategy, action or method used in a game

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Magic Dreams

Character’s sex: female

Character’s race: Mage/Warior Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Personality Traits: reader,hyper

Ambitions: small,red eyes,red hair

Strengths/Talents:reading, magic using

Weaknesses/Inabilities:hurting athers

Magic was just 2 when the atackt the palace,her father the king dit not survive,same as her mother.

The little girl is living in fair,she dusent trust anywone,or anything.

She hides herself from the athers,there al the same just want her powers,to bring dead alive.

Magic is alone she had frends but the al left her.

Her kindom is broken,no one knows who atackt the kindom,only she knows.

Peopol dont know she survived the ware.

The prinses the ruler of Atazy is slowly becoming dark,Then no one is save anymore...

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons.

• "ROLEPLAY RULES" is not a valid answer to the "What’s the rule you agree with the most?:" question
• You plagiarised your definitions straight from wiki. This is your last warning. Consult with our roleplay guide here! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying
• Your name does not fit in with the server theme which is very similar to Lord of the Rings.
• You may not apply as a mage of any sorts.
• You may not apply as a descendant of any royalty.
• You have many grammar mistakes that make your application hard to read. Please fix them.
• Your app has no server lore. Please add more about your travels in Vailor. Feel free to use our wiki page about Vailor! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor
• You lack personality traits. This helps build out your character!
• "small,red eyes,red hair" are not valid ambitions. Ambitions are accomplishments you wish to achieve in the future.
• You lack valid weaknesses.
• Your skin does not fit the server theme which is very similar to Lord of the Rings.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you need any help, feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.