[Denied] WhiteList Application

[pintinhotroll2 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:pintinhotroll2

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:the one that talks about cyberbullyng

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?No

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:The act of becoming another person and acting as someone you're not

What is metagaming?:Using information you've found out of character in game.

What is powergaming?:Making sure every action has no fail. I say "Cut off your left arm" When i should say "I trow my Axe to your left arm"

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Godran falktry

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:Mountain Dwarf

Character’s age:121

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragrafs. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Godrarn was born on the lands of  aegis, his father was mountain Dwarf, Godran take is life to be a miner like his father , and stay his whole life inside the caves.

Godran big dream is to be part of the dwarf legion.

Personality Traits:very  small and strong dwarf

Ambitions:Be a great warrior

Strengths/Talents: fast learner and good miner

Weaknesses/Inabilities: its a bad farmer is a slow runner

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):It weighs 47 pounds, is 3.5 feet tall, long brown hair and a long brown beard

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied...

 

-You need to expand upon your definitions. Maybe use an example?

 

-Your character's biography is far too short.

 

-Your character's biography includes no mention of any recent lore, as Aegis was abaondoned over 200 years ago in-character.

 

-Your entire application is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-You need to expand upon all your extra in-character info.

 

-You need to explain where your character got his skills in your character's biography.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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