application [Denied] [Pending]K1NKAID's Application

[K1NKAID 4]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:K1NKAID

How old are you?: 12(nearing 13)

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Very much so

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Trolling (every gamer has been trolled at least once)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? No not at all

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I looked up minecraft roleplay servers, I have been searching for  a server such as this for years!

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: To speak or act as if you were the character;to keep your in the speech context of the setting in which your character exists.

What is metagaming?: The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for an advantage.

What is powergaming?: Maximizing progress towards a specific goal, usually sacrificing role-playing to so. By doing this the powergamer becomes much more powerful than the actual roleplayers.

 

 

Character’s name: Kinkaid Forcon

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human (Highlander)

Character’s age: 21

Biography: Kinkaid lived in a small village under the Tiberan clans control, Although it had more of the Kaedreni Culture. He grew up in a happy environment in the snowy climate with friends and family all around. When he was 19 and about to marry his kolabek (fiancee), her and his entire village were massacred by a notorious bandit group. After catching up with the bandits wagon he assaulted the bandits with a stone spear and was easily defeated.After being badly injured, he was found by a knight patrol of the Duchy of Lorraine in which they nursed him back to health. Inspired by there kindness and bravery, he aspires to be a knight, and to avenge his village.

He then traveled to a small town after leaving the knights, where he found a library. After entering the library, pick up a book and stared at the symbol filled pages. A young woman saw his confusion and said "Can you read?". He shook his head no and said "Can you teach me?". The woman nodded her head yes and told him to follow her.They went to her house at the outskirts of the town. She told him she teaches outsiders and children the ways of the world. After one year of teaching he was done learning. He thanked the woman and set off. He traveled to many places and saw many wonders. One time he visited a port and saw wood elves. He was shock ed by the sight of them and thought "Wow...they are not just legends, they are real!". The wood elves caught him gawking, blushed and hurried away. He shrugged and continued on. Another time he was in a Major Town when he enter a tavern and saw Orcs, High Elves, Dwarves, Etc. He thought "wood elves were a surprise but this...this is amazing!". After leaving that tavern he had a love for alcohol.

Recently, he traveled to the Republic of Salvus (under control of The Holy Oren Empire) to complete a mercenary mission. The mission was simple, find a bandit named Groka, and eliminate him. He was traveling with  an archer and a brute,who had also taken the mission. The it took 3 days to track him down. He and his bandit cronies were drinking in the camp they set up,poking and jabbing hostages  with the hands. Going in a frenzy, he charged them the brute and archer following him in a attempt to stop him. He managed to kill one and injure 2 before he was nearly slain by the target. The brute and archer  distracted the bandits while the archers apprentice got the guards of a nearby city. The guards came and with the aid of the archer and brute killed the bandits and freed the hostages. He barely survived the ordeal and after collecting his reward, was on the road. After remembering the hostages his spent 1/3 of his minas on beer and ale.Spending the night in a tavern, he was robbed and now only had 15 mina's.

Personality Traits: Friendly, Loyal, Friends First Attitude, A bit Cocky at times

Ambitions: To be a Respected Royal Elite, To get revenge for his murdered village

Strengths/Talents: Adept at Combat, Decent Archer, Charismatic , Resistant to Cold, Good Cook, Good at Alchemy, Good Horsemanship, A Pretty Good Escape Artist 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Terrible Craftsman,  Depends on others to watch back during combat, if he sees defenseless innocents being hurt he goes berserk; becoming clumsy and uncaring about anything else, Weak to Heat,

Terrible at Reading Maps, Claustrophobic, Merciless Towards Bandits, Slight Alcoholic, Bad at Magics

Appearance: Curly/Unkempt Brown Hair, Dark Brown Eyes, Light Skin, Blue Dyed Leather Jacket with a White Cloth Undershirt, Leather Gauntlets, Black Leather on the inside Wool on the outside Pants, Leather Strap, 5"2", 120 lbs

Appearance(Screen Shot): http://imgur.com/RePEn6z

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

This is a decent app. However, some changes need to be made:

• Your definitions need more work put into them.
• Could you please expand on your story? Your current biography is a big cliche. Adding more story to him would probably fix the issue!
• Please add more to your strengths and weaknesses.

You have 24 hours to make your changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to consult me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• You plagiarized your definitions from Urban Dictionary (Tip: Switching some words and removing other on a definition still counts as plagiarized). This is your last warning.

You may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact any AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need any additional help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.