[Denied] Apply Pavel1236

[Pavel1236 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:BakBak1236
How old are you?:16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Keeping in character all the time, to make it feel immersive.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?A friend suggested.

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?:Acting like somebody else ,play a role ,being another person (or character) and keeping in it.
What is metagaming?:Is talking out side of the character ,talking about information which your character would realistically have no way of knowing.
What is powergaming?:Acting like you are strong and unbeatable ,acting like you will win anybody ,acting unrealisticlly ,because you cannot always win .

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name:Drax Brondig
Character’s sex:Male
Character’s race:Highlander
Character’s age:18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Drax Brondig was 4 years old ,he lived with his family a great life ,a life that each child would love to get ,but one day ,everything changed .....It was fall ,in The Kingdom Of Kaedrin ,in a small village called Bannar ,the Brondig family was having dinner when a loud scream was heard.Bard ,Drax's father decided to check what happend ,so he went outside .after 20 minutes Drax's mother ,Anne ,told him to stay in the house and wait until mommy and daddy will come back ,and she went outside .after an hour ,Drax decided to go out to find mommy and daddy .While he was walking ,he heard a voice ,a really soft ,but suffering voice saying "I wish I could see Drax 1 more time.....".At this moment Drax walked into the house where he heard that voice coming from and he saw his mother ,lying next to his father ,both slaughtered with their insides out.When Drax saw them ,he ran to them with his eyes full of tears ,he started crying for help ,but no one came .When Anne saw Drax stopped screaming ,she said :"Drax ,my little boy ,my little prince ,god bless you ,please dont be like the soliders we have here ,that cant defend our village from maniacs ,please grow up and become a strong man ,and defend the family you will have when you grow up......I love you.....".Drax remembered these words forever....and so,Drax grew up in an orphanage and now he is 18 ,he became a strong man ,but he wants to revenge ,and he wants to find the one who did that to his parents at that night .
Personality Traits:Strong and Self-Confident
Ambitions:To become stronger and to find the maniac who slaughtered his parents
Strengths/Talents:Archery ,Hunting and Blacksmithing
Weaknesses/Inabilities:Whispering (whenever somebody whispers Drax starts losing his mind) and dual weilding (he has a problem in his right arm since when he was 7)
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):height - 1.90 m. ,Not the nicest looking ,weight - 79 kg.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7305070/medieval-ears/

[tilly 5115]

Denied.

 

• You have plagiarized/copied word-for-word the definitions of roleplaying/metagaming/powergaming! This is your first warning. Doing such again will result in a ban of one week per plagiarized article.
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

 

 

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.