[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] ad245's Application

[ad245 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ad245
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I'm aware
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Nope
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "Even if you don’t technically break any listed rules, either from walking the fine line between breaking the rules and not or from consistently jumping through loopholes, it is a moderator’s right to warn or ban you if they deem it necessary."
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand all the rules
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was told about it by a friend who plays on the server already (verfumbo)
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Acting and/or speaking like a character you are portraying. Being someone you're not?
What is metagaming?: Using out of character knowledge in character when the character is not supposed to be aware
What is powergaming?: Doing actions which give the other player no choice in the matter in an inappropriate way, such as *Fires arrow into the heart of [ign]*
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Edrick Mallister
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Human, Heartlander
Character’s age: 18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Edric grew up in an olive garden under the hot sun of southern Oren, he was born to Robert Mallister and a peasant mother by the name of Genna. In his early life he grew up in simple surroundings but never lacking any necessities. Born after the Dukal war and a relative of Sarus Mallister which caused him and his father had to go into hiding in the south. This was when he was taught to read and write by his father. He was taught the way of farming during his years growing up and basic sword fighting. He does not like to talk too much about his past since he finds it too boring and normal and would much rather wait until he has achieved his own personal aspirations and then talk about how he acheived them.
Edric, being much like his father dislikes sitting still and he often had violent outbursts about farming and how he wanted to travel and become a knight so he could have people farming for him. His mother died in 1528 when he was twelve and roughly six years later, on the 1st of the first seed1534, his father later succumbed to his own stupidity when he swore "that he could kill a bear with a fork" after an inn dispute. He won the fight but later died of an infection in his right leg.
Edric, not wanting to spend the rest of his life farming he decided to sell the farm and with the scraps of money he had left from his parents along with the money from the farm, he bought himself a simple sword and a leather-bronze cuirass and he set off to Felsen to hopefully find work or to meet a relative.
Personality Traits: Kind, honorable when it counts, quick tempered and Extrovert
Ambitions: Making a name for himself in any way he can and create and live with a family
Strengths/Talents: Decent swordsman and an aspiring enchanter/Blacksmith. Likes to socialize and enjoys talking to people which think the same as him and have similar views.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Is quick tempered and gets very annoyed during arguments and with people who disagree with him.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He stands a slightly above average height of 6'2 with an average build, slim and slightly muscular. His weight is approximately 154lb and he does not have any distinguishing features such as scars.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/2eBWial.png

Edited January 4, 2016 by ad245
Cannot already be part of an order in game as there are rp entry requirements for recruits which my character has not completed in rp.

[Keldrith 717]

Pending

 

Your application was really good but there is just one simple thing you need to fix before you can be accepted into this great rolepay server. Before anything let me mention that you have 24 hours to make all revisions before your application is denied. Good luck and I hope to see you on the server soon, be sure to PM me with any and all questions you might have~

 

 

- You mentioned  ' he was once a member of the Golden Crows and the Order of Amyas.  ' Although reasonable for your characters race and beliefs, you cannot already be apart of an Order in game, since there are things that each group usually has to do before they are even allowed in as recruits. So be sure to edit this out during revisions. 

 

 

[Keldrith 717]

Accepted! Thanks for speedy edit

 

[Keldrith 717]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[CosmicWhaleShark 2488]

Player Whitelisted.