[Denied] [Pending]Official_Pat's application

[GoodEgg 51]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: official_pat

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rules against powergaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Heard about it from a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting out a role that is usually not your own (For example, a man can roleplay as a woman)

What is metagaming?: Using knowlede your character shouldn't have in an IC form, that they have obtained in an OOC fassion.

What is powergaming?: A player can be described as a power-gamer if he or she presumes or declares that his or her own action against another player character is successful without giving the other player character the freedom to act on his own prerogative.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Bob (No last name)

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Highlander / Human

Character’s age: 24

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Bob was raised by a poor highlander farming family on the city outskirts of Oren's capital, Felsen an only child. On the farm, is where Bob spent most of his days, milling about the place in a generally bored fashion. Bob’s childhood was completely generic, honestly, with no particular events of note throughout his young life. He made friends, he lost friends, he grew up and he eventually left home.

 

Bob’s departure from his family was a sorrowful time for him, after all his folks had done for him, yet he carried on the road 17 years young and walked away, to make better for himself than what birth would’ve had it. He did whatever work came away around the many places he visited, be it deliveries to fishing, trying to find a place he could finally settle down in with a decent jingle in his pocket.

 

Though the issue was, Bob often found himself striking hard times or spending more money than he neccesarily should do with the ammount he was earning. He'd often spend what little he had on gambling at the loval tavern, along with drinking possibly too much. Though, I suppose what classifies as 'too much' would probably vary between races, however it was quite clear he drank more than he likely should've. After at least his seventh, or as he would tell you his first and only, time he woke up sleeping in a pig sty curled up in hay he'd decided he wanted more. It finally clicked, and enough was enough. So, Bob set out to turn his life around and visited a local church in Visiga where he met the local priest and explained his sorrows and confessed to his ill deeds. The priest explained the religion of the Canon, and connected strongly with Bob. This gave Bob a strong connection with faith, something he previously lacked. He spent a few months in the church with the priest, studdying what he could of not only the church's teachings but it's history also. Though, after a month he believed he had learned all he could, and that he finally could carry on with his travels a few nails wiser.

 

Personality Traits: Stubborn, determined and short-sighted

Ambitions: No ambition, just wants to see where the road takes him

Strengths/Talents: Usually persuasive, resistant to harsh weather, sees the good in people (though this could also be seen as a flaw) and is usually fairly confident

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Often lacks common sense, lacks phsyical strength and can sometimes act too hastily, letting his confidence get the best of him.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

• Black, messy hair

• 6'2

• Average in build

• Undefined facial features

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[img=http://imgur.com/SuYLKoU]

 

Updated due to requests from AT.

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

The following changes need to be made before the app can get accepted:

• Your defintions are vague. Please expand on them. Feel free to use our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Except the mentioning of Oren, no other lore is used. Please add more to it. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor (The new has been set up so wikispaces are no longer used)
• Your biography is quite dry. Could you add one more paragraph about your journeys and the events that happened to you?
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.

You have 24 hours to make your changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• You powergaming defnition has been plagiarized from internet. This is your last warning.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.