[Denied] Applying to lordofthecraft

[Omeganess16 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Omeganess16

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking for quest games 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying? The acting out or performance of a particular role

What is metagaming?: Strategy,action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset

What is powergaming?:interacting with games,or game-like systems

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Lora

Character’s sex:Female

Character’s race:Dwarf

Character’s age:20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Lora was  like her father,a very loyal girl who helped make weapons for  other  dwarfs   and  humans .Lora liked to  explore things and craft things with her hands ever since her mother died.Lora  has been  trying to do everything that she can so her father  will  stay in  good  condition .Lora sometimes worries that something is gonna  happen to him  b/c half of the time he is never home  b/c he is always mining .So one day Lora goes out  to find some  food  from the market  and  she   catches some children and their fathers sword fighting  and Lora  was really interested in what they were  doing,   so  after lora finished shopping  she  went to her father and   asked if she  could be a guardian  of the castle  and guard the people like  her mother did. When her father heard it   he said "No Lora you are all I  have  I  can't afford losing you like your mother" .Lora   was upset   but she   told her father  "I know what happened to her you dont have to  hide   it  she  was a great warrior  but you can  live in  the past we have to move on  and fight for what little we have".Lora  dad  said "fine be a warrior but dont come whinning to me  when   it sucks".Lora did what she  felt was right  and she went  to the  king  and asked if she could join the  king  said  "show me your skills" .Lora did  what the king said and the king said  yes and    the  next day  she was training with the dwarfs(castle defenders) to protect the castle and the king.TO BE CONTINUED...

Personality Traits:Nice,Courageous

Ambitions:To  fight for what is right

Strengths/Talents:Bow and arrow/Can shoot very  well  up close and far away

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Swordfighting/upclose combat

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):green eyes blonde hair,black clothing

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• You defnitions have been plagiarized from internet. This is your last warning.
• Except the mentioning of [Blank], no other lore is used. Please add more to it. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• You story makes little sense. Why would a king accept a dwarf that had 0 military training? Could you please rework your biography?

• You're missing personality traits. This helps build our your character!

  Please add more to your ambitions.

• Your skin does not match our servers theme which is very similar to Lord of the Rings.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

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