[Denied] My submission.

[DinoShaman 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:DinoShaman

How old are you?:24

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I very much like the rule that you can't go back to where you died until thirty minutes have passed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?I recently figured out there was roleplay servers for minecraft, and when I saw Lord of the Craft I thought it was perfect.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Playing as a cahracter of your creation(most the time), and meeting other people while your at going on normally some kind of made up quest.

What is metagaming?:When you have more knowledge than your character does, and you use it to your advantage.

What is powergaming?:Forcing another player to do something against there will or consent.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Vale Treewick

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:HighLander

Character’s age:20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):I was born to poor farming family.As long as I can remember I've only ever lived in Vailor, its my home.Well everything was always peaceful in my life.What else could I ask for I had a caring family and even though we were simple farmers it was a decent home.Then came the day I would always remember.It was a normal than came a knock on the door.Me being me ran straight up and opened it.At the time I was still a kid, so of course I had no idea what to think when three men came storming into the house yelling about an overdue payment.By the end of that night the farm was on fire, and a stranger was carrying me off to a camp in the woods.Once old enough I did escape the bandit camp, and now I just spend my days seeking more knowledge on the arcane magic and the void.

Personality Traits:Shy, and often thought of as weird because of that,funny if you know me though.

Ambitions:To live till tomorrow

Strengths/Talents:I practice conjuration magic

Weaknesses/Inabilities:I've never practiced any sort of acrobatics so i'm not usually one to dodge  or move around in a fight.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):H:6"4W:130.I have brown hair and blue eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Your defintions are vague. Please expand on them. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Your current story seems like a cliche (the whole dead parents thing and a bandit raid), but I believe one more paragraph in your biography can fix that!
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your character can't posses any sort of  magic in your application.
• Your skin does not match our servers theme which is very similar to Lord of the Rings.
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.