[Denied] Application

[DmZplaysMC 0]

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: DmZplaysMC

 

How old are you?: I am 15 years old.

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Of course.

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That harassment isn't acceptable.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Saw a youtube video about this server.

 

Definitions

 

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: It is role play, you create your own character/role and then you start to act.

 

What is metagaming?: It is taking advantage of said information. Like loopholes and such.

 

What is powergaming?: Etc. character being too powerful orsomeone who ignores others actions.

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alitoras Revoir

 

Character’s sex: Male.

 

Character’s race: Human/Highlander.

 

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Alitoras grew up in The Kingdom of Renatus (Anthos) in which his father was a bussiness man who could talk almost anyone in to buying his stuff. Alitoras got bullied when he grew up because the kids didn't like him because of his father who had powers of deception and that power made people angry but they couldn't do anything because he was one of those guys who always could buy his way out of stuff. Alitoras always dreamed about being a captain in the royal army so he started training from a very young age to become a good leader and soldier. His father didn't like this because he wanted Alitoras to become like him. Alitoras who was very good with bows and swords was always dreaming of joinning the royal army. His family didn't like it but they couldn't do anything because he was free to make his own choices. He said goodbye to his family and his friends. and he joined the army to help and serve the king.

 

Personality Traits: Honest, fearless, brave, stubborn and also a casanova.

Ambitions: To serve his king and get a powerful position in the army.

Strengths/Talents: Very good at fighting with weapons and to get women.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Sometimes he can be ignorant and selfish.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): His height is 1.77m and he weights about 80 kg (I don't know lbs), Alitoras has stylish brown hair and brown eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

sorry i cant get it to work but i will send a picture over skype my skype id is Daggedaking

 

Sincerely DmZplaysMC

 

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Please put more work into it.
• Your roleplaying and powergaming definitions are vague. Please expand on them. Feel free to consult our wiki page about roleplaying here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• The lore in your application is outdated. Anthos was was 116 years ago! We currently live in Vailor. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your biography is quite dry. Could you add one more paragraph about your journeys and the events that happened to you?
• Could you please add more lore into your application? Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.
• Your skin is missing (You can simply post the skin file in here!)

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.