[Denied] Application

[Malistaire 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: KungFuGumba.

How old are you?: 11.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule that villains should not return items when stolen.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I Googled "Lord of the Rings Minecraft Servers."

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a role.

What is metagaming?: A strategy, or action used in a game.

What is powergaming?:It is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems. 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: MetaComet

Character’s sex: Boy

Character’s race: Wood-Elf

Character’s age: 49

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Hello, I am MetaComet, and this is my Biography. I was born in Mirkwood. I love hunting and using my  bow and arrows. the only thing I don't like about my home are the spiders, I don't like spiders.

    The reason I am writing this is that one day I will be Famous. I don't know if I will be famous in a good way or bad. I will most likely be famous for making peace between all races. I love riding my horse will using my bow.

Personality Traits: Funny, Strong.

Ambitions: Archery, Horseback riding.

Strengths/Talents:good at playing reed pipes. is 6'5. Weighs 120 lbs.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: is very emotional sometimes and does not like killing

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Has black hair, skin color white, eyes are green and often wheres dark cohered clothes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/kungfugumba-7056949.png (go to this adrdess)

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Sadly, this application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

~Your definitions for roleplaying, metagaming, and powergaming are sadly all too short, vague, and slightly wrong. I'd suggest formulating your definitions through definitions found on search engines, even providing an example to help! However, make sure not to copy the definitions because that would be plagiarism and you will receive a warning for such

 

~Your take on the biography section is a bit misled. We are looking for a biography based upon the life of your character so I'd suggest speaking in third person since you are roleplaying them. This biography needs to be more of a backstory and narration, not opinions like 'I don't like spiders' but information based on their life and events that occurred.

 

~Try to elaborate on your personality traits! Maybe their sense of humor is almost childlike or wicked... there has to be more than just funny!

 

~The skin color of a wood elf (mali'ame) is usually always tan; humans (vallah) tend to retain a purely white skin tone. I'd fix this as well whether it be they have a normal tan complexion or lighter tan.

 

~Your skin is a little bit off from the description of your character. Try to really capture their traits; this is an example skin from what your features spoke of:
 

Spoiler

 

Please message me if you have anything I need to explain on this application or any questions! Please do not reapply before 24 hours as stated above!

 

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