[Denied] Application

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Supahdat

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber Bullying is strictly prohibited and there are harsh punishments if one commits cyber bullying

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No I read them all and managed to take them in one by one

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? : I wanted to role play in a server and when I searched up a role play server on google this website popped up. 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: acting as a fictional or real character in a game or in real life

What is metagaming?: using external factors to affect your gameplay and role play also using the lore

What is powergaming?: basically trying to achieve a specific goal without caring about the lore or story

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alphar

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

                 Born in a small town in the highlands, Alphar was an orphan who was raised by a town's guard and his family. He befriended many people and the town members loved him for his kindness an generosity. He is known to be an excellent swordsman for his age but he still has a lo to learn. However, Alphar noticed that he is somehow immune to fire and is able to move with short bursts of speed and is able to summon some blue fire. He is not sure why this is happening to him. One day while playing the fields, he notices that smoke his coming out of his town. When he comes back, everyone in his town are either slaughtered or burned by an undead tribe aligned with Iblees. Alphar vows to get revenge on the Undead but he blames himself the fire believing he started it himself since the fire was blue and green. Alphar now seeks to journey to Vailor in hopes of receiving a job that will allow him to protect the good innocents against evil 

Personality Traits: Friendly, Generous, quick to anger sometimes and sometimes rash.

Ambitions: To protect the realms from evil and the undead.

Strengths/Talents:  excellent swordsman, able to summon blue fire and quick bursts of speed (He recently discovered this, but it's not too op)

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Has not mastered his powers completely, too loyal to his friends and still has a lot to learn about combat

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): height is 5'10, weight is 180 LB, dark brown hair, age 19, lean and well built.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

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Sadly, this application has been denied for the following reasons:
 

~Your powergaming definition is slightly wrong and a little too vague. I suggest formulating your definitions based on those found in search engines. If it seems rather iffy for you still, even try to use an example. However, do not copy results found because this would be plagiarism and will result in a warning.

~Your biography includes some unreal elements. Characters are not allowed to be created having already known magic or these unrealistic including the fire resistance, the fire summoning, and short bursts of speed. The character might be able to move fast which is more realistic, but short bursts of speed seems to be quite iffy. 

~With the statement above, your weaknesses/inabilities need to be changed to more realistic ones such as a short temper for example.

~Your biography needs to include more lore of the server to assure your basic understanding of important elements of server. Your reference to the undead was a good attempt, but it doesn't align to server history I believe. It needs to be more realistic based upon the time period or actual events that previously occurred. For example, maybe the village was attacked by a tribe of Iblees supporters. I'd suggest looking into the Lotc Wiki found here to provide you with some information to add and edit: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

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