[Denied] [Pending] Lazygirl13's Whitelist Application

[Lazygirl13 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: lazygirl13

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: using the lore given and not creating your own lore as you go. It's leads to meta and PG. It's also rude. The staff members have worked hard on the lore. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A few of my friends had been talking about it and I've heard about it from a few other roleplay servers.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Creating a character and acting out their everyday life.

What is metagaming?: using information in OOC to benefit yourself in rp.

What is powergaming?: Forcing a action onto another players character, ex; Jonny stabs Lucy in the heart, instantly killing her.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Aelin Givner

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Forest Dwarf

Character’s age: 27

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Aelin was born in a forest. She was raised in a forest and loved her life. When she turned 5 she had already knew the basics on how to raise animals and catch a fish. Her family did not have a decent life and riches but they cared deeply for each other. Aelin had a happy childhood until she turned 7. Her family let her attempt to herd a few cows and horses with the help of her father. Aelin knew what she was doing but one wrong move and she was shoved into a cow. The cow, startled by the small shove ran forward and knocked into her father. Due to this the other cows begun to panic and stampeded. Her father made his way to her and protected her from the cows until they settled down. Since that day she always walked with caution. Aelin's mother was a baker in the village. Aelin would sneak in when she could to steal a piece of food; if she was lucky, she could steal a whole loaf of bread! Due to Aelin's stealing her mother almost lost her job. Ever since that day her mother gave her a smack for stealing she never stole again.

 

later in life, Aelin grew to be a okay-ish looking dwarf. She had a childish face and her family gave her the nickname of Flecks, for the freckles on her face. When Aelin grew to the age of 20 she asked her parents for leave of the forest. She wanted to see the world with her own eyes. Her family warned her of the wars raging on and the creatures out there but, that was what she wanted to see! She was longing for a life of adventure and fun! No rules or a border to stop her... at least until she found someone to settle down with. With her parents permission, Aelin set off on her quest. She's been traveling for a few years and has been looking for the one place now. A new start... a new home.

Personality Traits: She's non-hostile, a bit greedy and terrible with her words. She seems to be arrogant but her true self cares deeply for others. 

Ambitions: More of an adventurer but hopes to be a baker.

Strengths/Talents: Fishing, baking, ranching. She can see the better in people and is decently peaceful.  

Weaknesses/Inabilities: 

She's quite a hog of food and drinks but will share if absolutely needed.  She cannot fight. She can't use big words and can often sound stupid. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Aelin is 4'8 and weighs around 140 pounds. She has pretty, green colored eyes and long, messy brown hair which is kept in two ponytails in front of her face. She has light, chocolate color skin that matches her red dress nicely. 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):  http://imgur.com/KKkff8w

[Lego XBOX 915]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed it on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below. You have twenty four (24) hours to make these changes, message me if you have any questions or concerns. Failing to fulfill the requested changes will result in this application being denied. By being denied you will have to wait 12 hours before re-applying with the proper changes in place.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for dwarves can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dwarves )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request given above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around the time of 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Lego XBOX 915]

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 12 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make requested edit to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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