[Denied] My whitelist application

[Rosa 3]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: slayerrosa

How old are you?: 10 nearly 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Destructive hacks such as kill aura, auto-mining, and free-cam, among other plugins granting an unfair advantage are not permitted. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I heard about the server from a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you are in a story linked to your character

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you start with the title "Master" (like: "Master Farmer") 

What is powergaming?: If a guard arrests a thief and binds his hands and legs and the thief just say "The Thief uses his strength to break the bonds and runs away"

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Rosa Brown

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 12

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Rosa was only 3 months when her mother died. Her dad was very sad and he tried to commit suicide but a hunter saw it and stopped it. Rosa was 1 year old when she first could talk. Her first word was "mommy" Rosa 2 years old and her father died because he was sick and a stranger took Rosa as her daughter. Rosa was 4 years first time she used a hoe to plant seeds in the dirt. Rosa was 5 years old when she first harvested some wheat from the farm but soon the new mother died because she was attacked by some bandits. Rosa didn't want anyone to know because she was scared of what people would do to her so she got out of the house she lived in and sold the wheat by her self. Rosa was 7 years old when a boy would come home to her and see her house, but Rosa didn't want anyone to come home to her because then the boy would tell the guards she was alone and then the guards would take her. Rosa was 10 years old and her house burned down and now she told the guards that she was homeless and parent less but the guards just ignored them, but then the boy came and invited her to come home to him and life there untill she was old enough to own a house. The boy got her to work on their farm it was alot larger than the farm that she had. Rosa was 12 years old when she left the boy and stole his gold. 

Personality Traits: Rosa is very friendly and she likes animals.

Ambitions: Rosa wanna be a farmer

Strengths/Talents: She is good to lie, she is very creative and healthy

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She is scared from dark places, she isnt strong

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): She is a very small person for her age.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://s1278.photobucket.com/user/slayervictor/media/rosa_zpsyu3csqwn.png.html

 

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Your application has sadly been denied due to the some things that need to be changed. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Concerning your application though, I think your skin is brilliant and your simplistic ambition is adorable! However, these changes need to be made in your next application:
 

~Your metagaming definition is completely wrong sadly. I suggest navigating through search engines, like google, to find some reasonable explanations that could help you formulate your own definition. Do not copy and paste a definition found since that would be plagiarism, and we do not take highly of it. As said, make your own definition please. Also, your example concerning the thief was good! Know when in-game, it's actually possible for the thief to do something like that under reasonable circumstances. Usually for anything involving luck, we use the command /roll in order to find out the odds of success. (The last two sentences were just info to know.)

~When applying to Lotc, your character's age must be 18 or older. When you are in-game though, you are free to make anyone as young as 5 years old, but for applying the character's age is 18 or older. This will most likely change your biography so this is why its also been put to denial.

~Your biography is decent when reading over it, but it doesn't contain any lore concerning the server. We need to know you are able to comprehend lore of the server which is why we have this requirement. Some suggestions may be something about the belief in the creator, a town she grew up in or moved to, or some recognition/response to big events that occurred (know we are currently in Vailor too). Anyways, I ask you spice up your biography with some lore found from the wiki here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
 

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The thread has been killed

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Ignore the killed statement. . . something messed up. Please message me if you have any more questions though! I'd be happy to answer! Hope to see you applying again soon.

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Moved to Denied Application Forum.