[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Whitelist Application for ChaoticFuz3 (Has been Edited)

[chaoticfuz3 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ChaoticFuz3

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: My favourite rule is "Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely."  Because I think Bullying is not acceptable no matter what form
 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  A friend told me about this server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a fictional character, personifying it and doing actions that would make sense with the character

What is metagaming?: Using information you know out of character to influence your decisions in role-play.

What is powergaming?: When a character does unrealistic things that benefit him in cases like battles. Also performing emotes that doesn't give the other party a chance to respond

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Tristan

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Highlander

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Tristan was an average teenager whom grew up in the City of Felsen for most of his life. His parents hunted for refuge to raise a family and escape their home village which had been prone to excessive bandit attacks. When Tristans family first arrived in the City of Felsen they didn't really practice a faith, getting a citizenship at Felsen required the whole family to be baptized under the Canonist faith. Tristan was very young at this time, but he still practices the faith in his own levels. The creator always being in his mind and influencing decisions and such. In all Fairness Tristan was a mediocre lad but he still sought after an adventure often pestering guards for work. He then thought that he could, he decided that adventuring took his mind off the problems he had faced with family and his childhood friend. Conflict with the family rose and at the time his friend would always cheer him up by playing with him in a game they called "Adventures" and they would role play to be knights and whilst playing one day they ran across a few Uruk Bandits and they were pestering them to play along in their game of adventures, coincidentally their camp was right next to their "fort" and then they decided to raid the uruk bandits for their gear, whilst doing so they got caught up in the gold that they found, they thought that if thet sstole the gold all of Tristan's family problems would be diminished of and so they packed their bags of gold but Tristan was greedy and decided to take more valuables such as jewellery and look for something of more value but whilst being greedy they were caught by the uruk bandits and one grabed his childhood friend and Screamed with great power "RUN BOY!!!" "Please we are sorry just let my friend go and we won't say or do anything to harm you ever in our lives again" replied Edward (Tristan's Friend) Tristan Escaped by using the fire to burn the ropes around his hands and whilst running home he looks back and whipsers "Sorry, I will get the guard to rescue you" He runs with all his might to Edwards house and tells his family what had happened, they then go running to the guards and inform them of what had happened. They create the plan to raid the bandits camp, when this raid was conducted all that could be found is the camps a fire and Edwards body severed in two where his head and body was clearly separated. The family of Edward cries that their youngest son was killed by the Uruks hands but by the actions of Tristan.

 

Tristan felt a strong guilt that his friends death was a result of his greed. He decided to runaway with everything he had and found himself walking to nowhere he knew, he had to rest and decided to sleep in a carriage and it brought him to the lands of Lorraine and there he decided to do what he could to bring as much as positivity and happiness to others lives because that's what Edward had done. He grew into a man that was  Charitable, Generous and Open Hearted.

 

Personality Traits:   Charitable, Generous and Open Hearted.

Ambitions: To gain a high rank in the holy order

Strengths/Talents:  Finesse handwork and coordination skills, increased endurance whilst maintaining a decent speed.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: to be selfish

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

185cm tall 

80kg

blue eyes

strong posture

brown hair

built body type

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://imgur.com/TvszGVk

http://imgur.com/zV2xfAa

 

[_mkkk_ 194]

 

[_mkkk_ 194]

Currently, your application has been put under pending since some adjustments need to be made within the next 24 hours. Failure to do so will result in an automatic denial without providing me a reason as to why you weren't able to. Concerning your application, your definitions were great and your biography was extremely colorful. However, the current changes need to be made:

~Your biography contains some recognition of server lore within it such as Felsen. However, there needs to be a little bit more in it. For example, you could tie in belief in the Creator to your story in some way in order to connect to his ambition. For info, check the Lotc wiki here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

~Your strengths concerning being able to run incredibly fast for long periods is slightly unrealistic. He may be fast, but it'd be hard for anyone to keep up a quick pace for long periods. I suggest maybe saying he has increased endurance and decent speed. 

~Your skin is slightly not falling under the theme of the server. I only say this due to the fact that he appears to be wearing a hoodie and sneakers which aren't anything found in Lotc. I'd ask that you find a more realistic skin to the medieval/fantasy theme. Make sure also that it isn't too commonly used since we don't want various people having the same skin. Below is something more realistic of what we are looking for within the context of the server.
 

Spoiler

If you have any questions concerning the changes that need to be made or if your next skin is reasonable, please message me!

[_mkkk_ 194]

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait as a GM will implement you to within 24-hours! While you are waiting your are more than welcomed to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

[_mkkk_ 194]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

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Player Whitelisted.