[Denied] Kifferlinchen 3rd application

[Kifferlinchen 2]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Kifferlinchen

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cheating and hacks, it is not fair for other members

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? website 

 What is roleplay?  roleplay is when you act like someone else, could be a fictional character

What is Metagaming?  metagaming is when you use information or things that the character you chose does not have

What is Powergaming?   Powergaming is  forcing a character to use the actions that your character does.  ex: a dungeon keeper bars a criminal, and the criminal breaks free and bars the keeper

 

Character’s name: Andy

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human HighLanders

Character’s age: 18 Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

                                                  Long ago when Andy was still small he was living with his family and they were having a great time enjoying time together,  and then a large group of orcs came and took his family away, and took the somewhere he did no know. He started chasing after the orcs but was only 5 at that time and he stumbled, and then  a stranger met him near a river, Andy was really hungry, and he was cold, the stranger took him to live with her.                                                       

                                             Andy learned about the world and what was happening he learned about the war between the humans and orcs, and then when he turned 16 he decide he was ready to go search for his family.. The stranger name was Anne, she gave him some food and clothes and a map, and on his way he encountered  many new species and people, made friends and enemies,. Andy started his Adventure.

Personality Traits: Adventurous, Polite,Funny, handsome

Ambitions: find his family

Strengths/Talents: he is strong, does not give up easily, and he is adventurous, and brave and handsome

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He does not listen well, he can get mixed up with directions

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He has black hair, and weight the average weight of a 18 year old 6 feet tall

 please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5558123/brown-robin-hood/

url:skin_201505170

 

 

 

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This application has been denied automatically for the reason of applying before the next 24 hours have been passed. Your last application was denied 11 hours ago which isn't close to 24 hours. Please make sure to read the suggestions made by the Application Team and our policy. This isn't to be mean; this is how we conduct our job in order not to be cluttered with reattempt after reattempt that doesn't allow time for true perfection. Message me if you need anything! I glimpsed over this before and I do have some changes you need to fix in your next application:

 

~Your biography includes no server lore. Please check out the Lotc wiki in order to become knowledgeable and include server lore such as religion, major cities, or even major events that occurred.

 

~Develop a real story in your biography rather than using tiny, short statements with low relevance to much. You need to provide more info and clarification to your story so you have something to build upon in the server. Rather than just saying he was searching for his family, where did he look? Did he get hurt on the way or meet anyone such as Anne? How did he meet her anyway? Is he trying to become too independent at such a young age? I have all these questions based on that vague statement. Try to eliminate them and further your biography with real context to speak about once in the server.
 

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