[Denied] Doodlebaggins Applaction

[Doodlebaggins 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Doodlebaggins

How old are you?:17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):100% aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes i have read the rules and i agree.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:i agree most to the first rule in comunity conduct

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):there are not.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?looked for server with servral races and this was the first to pop-up active.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:its to be in a diffrent perspective that isnt your own.

What is metagaming?:its to go past the given envirement and use  out side resources.

What is powergaming?:its a way to maximis proggres to a goal.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:barangard elmdark

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:dark elf.

Character’s age:25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):i live in vivec where my father and my mother grew up .my father tought me how to fight hand on hand when i was 2.when i was 5 i moved to being abble to use swords in our training.on my 10 birthday my father took me out hunting which is when i learned how to use a bow a little bit my father and i are deffinitly not the best bowmen.on my 15th birthday my father allowed me to go out hunting with my 2 friends and we didnt catch much expt 3 rabbits.on my 16th birthday my father took me out on his boat and tought me the little bit he knew about how to fish. on my 17th birthday my mother was killed by a hafling out in the field when my mother was collecting our crops. 3 days later i found the hafling who killed my mother and i killed him without him noticing that i was following him.on my 18th birthday i found a couple swords just sitting out in the roud so i brought them over to father.father found out that they wernt ordanary swords so he had to find a way to get rid of them.on my 19th birthday my father dissapipeared. .on my 20th birthday my father reapeared at the house to tell me that he might be gone for a while. 4 days later he assassinated king skippy with the swords he said he was going to get rid of.then on my 25th birthday my father was killed by a dwarf. now i am searching for the dwarf that killed my father and i want to find out why he killed my father.

Personality Traits:Sensible,Empathetic,Observant,Sensual,Gentle,Philosophical,Responsible,Charming,Passionate,Sensual,Martyr,Needy,Foolish,Frivolous,Apathetic,Gullible,Tactless,Anti-social,Temperamental,Verbose

Ambitions:exploring,hand to hand combat,sword practice

Strengths/Talents:Sensible,Empathetic,Observant,Sensual,Gentle,Philosophical,Responsible,Charming,Passionate,Sensual

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Martyr,Needy,Foolish,Frivolous,Apathetic,Gullible,Tactless,Anti-social,Temperamental,Verbose

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):6 feet 7 inches weighs 135 pounds and has amber ish red eyes with silver hair.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[mitto 2312]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

(1)

Please improve the overall grammar of this application, there are many spelling mistakes and errors. Remember that roleplaying requires a good understanding of literacy. It doesn't need to be perfect, however you need to at least try.

 

(2)

Your definitions are incorrect, please correct them using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

(3)

Your biography doesn't make any sense, please rewrite it using better grammar and paragraphing.

 

(4)

Your character is too tall for your race.

 

Dark elves don't usually grow above 6'0.

 

(5)

Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

 

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

 

 

 

[mitto 2312]

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