[Denied] kajtheonlyreal's whitelist aplication

[kajtheonlyreal 0]

What is your minecraft name?: kajtheonlyreal

 

How old are you?: 11

 

have you read and agreed the rules?: yes

 

What is your favorite rule you agree with?: no hacking or using x ray texture packs

 

How did you find out the lotc server?: from YouTube

 

what is roleplaying?: roleplaying is playing a act with someone or with more people.

 

what is powergaming?: powergaming is in caracter so if you are roleplaying it is alot more real life

 

what is metagaming?: metagaming is out of caracter. its rp with alot more fanasy

 

what is your caracter name?: tommy beurgon

 

what is your caracter sex?: male

 

what is your caracter race?: halfling

 

 

what is your caracter age?: 79

 

Caracter biography: i came from the high north to find a shelter, and after 3 years living in a jungle i finnaly found a shelter, a halfling town.

 

caracter traits: not strong, brave, loves mining, hates liers.

 

ambitions: mining and traveling

 

caracter strengths/talents: mining, traveling, helping other halflings and friends.

caracter weaknesses/inabilities: fighting, scared for snakes (he was too long in the jungle)

 

appearance: small, weight: 25, brown hair,

 

 

 i hope this is enough and that you guys like it! :D

-john beurgon (kajtheonlyreal)

 

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Denied

• Your application is riddled with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, so much so that I'm concerned how'd you'd actually keep up with role-play fluently. Please try to fix this.
• Your biography doesn't have any server lore and is only a sentence long whereas it's supposed to be two paragraphs minimum, please add more and include some lore next time which can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• You have neglected to include a skin file or screenshot, please add one next time.
• It would make it easier for you and I if you'd simply copy and paste the template for applying rather than typing it all out. The application format can be found here: 

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

 

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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