[Denied] [Pending]My Second Try At Applying

[SHADOW_WARRIOR45 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SHADOW_HUNTER45

How old are you?: 10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The First rule of Community Conduct

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I don't know if i would get banned if i had terrible role playing

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: it's when a player puts them selves in a virtual characters shoes and do they're actions for them

What is metagaming?: metagaming is when you the player is using information that your virtual character shouldn't know (player goes in dungeon and uses internet for more information about the dungeon)

What is powergaming?:powergaming is when you force things that you do to other players or the virtual character (someone tries to kill you but you have armor and they would just get a cut but they still kill you)

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Kao Enphor

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: The Wood Elves

Character’s age: 50

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):    

 

    He was born outside Laurelin, in a small house. He lived a good life but he had no friends. He was always alone but he had a certain interest in history. He has learned more about history than anyone in the school, he learned about Artimec Camoryn and Leanniel and how it was destroyed by Setherien's black scourge and what inspired him to learn more about history was his grandpa, he was one of the soldier's in the Oren-Haelun'or war and whenever he visited his grandpa he always told stories and he was so interested and so fascinated. His interest in history is what made people avoid him so he decided he would join the Order of Sirame and be like his grandpa because his parents were just normal wood elves. So in the past years he has been training and training so he can join the Order of Sirame.

 

    In his 50th birthday he decided to try and go for the army, but before he went he visited his grandpa. His grandpa told him one last story and then gave him his old cap. The cap was what his grandfather wore when he got accepted to the army. Kao gathered all his stuff and head out for the place. When he got there he did a secret move his grandfather learned, after that he didn't get accepted in but he made a promise to his grandfather that if he made it in tell him first but he didn't get in so he just ran as far as he can and decided he was a one man army, he looked at the cap he gave him and decided he would keep it to remember.

Personality Traits:

-Adventurous: Kao mostly takes risks a lot

-Shy: Kao get's nervous in front of a group of people 

-Realistic: Kao shows a practical idea of whats expected 

-Friendly: Kao is usually kind and pleasant to other people who don't betray him

Ambitions:

-To be like his grandfather

Strengths/Talents:

-Close-Range

-Long-Range

-Mapping

-Building

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

-Prone to whistling and humming

-Terrible Memory

-Can only kill one person at a time 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5 foot 3 inches 140 lbs, Wears a green hat, always wears green

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

https://gyazo.com/e083b719eed39c1833e417286f77bf5d

[Crowbill 493]

Spoiler

Good job on the app! It's quite good! However, some things need fixing:

• Could you please add more newer server lore into your application? Lore about your journeys in Vailor and such. Feel free to use our wiki about our current Realm Vailor for more info!https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Please add more to them.
• Your skin does not match our servers Wood elf theme. Please update your skin. This is the refrence that can you help you with the skin!Welcome to Lord of the Craft! You will be implemented by a GM shortly. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need any help!

You have been denied for following reasons:

• Applicant failed to make set changes in the given time period.

You may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

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