[Denied] [Pending] Application

[DesmoGirl 0]

When I found this server on Minecraft Forums and I was super duper excited about it! So I just found out the server and was over the moon, but when I couldn't get through the portal when I clicked the sign, I asked and I was some sorta "soul". So I'm hoping this will change that. Yeah. So anyways my username is DesmoGirl, and I am 13 years. I am still reading the books for Lord of the Rings, but I'm getting along quickly. Anyways I read the rules, and I agree the most with the rule always stay in character, especially because of my early acting skills. Now on to the definitions I guess!

 

Roleplay: Acting out a role/ person in a role-playing game.

Metagaming: Using outside knowledge to rank higher in a game

Powergaming: A player who learns rules to perfection to become the highest rank/ the best

 

Name: Artemis Aldain 

Gender: Female

Race: Half-Elf

Age: 27

Bio: Family  left Middle Earth when she was in her 6th year, dad died in war, mother was human while father was elf, has two older siblings: Coneraid and Sylvie, mother works as a healer in the elf village.

Personality: funny, sarcastic, adventurous, kind, cool

Ambitions: wants to see and travel around the world, loves to venture

Talents: Singing, dancing, pranking

Weaknesses: she gets a funny feeling around smoke, that is pretty much it

Appearance: long dirty blonde hair, height 5 ft 11, weight 115 lbs  

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

 

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Please message me after making your changes.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples! At the bottom of this post I’ve included some resources you can use.

 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Halflings

 

Unfortunately this isn't a Lord of the Rings server. Lord of the Craft exists in it's own universe and has no ties to Tolkien's work.

 

With that in mind, I'd like for you to rewrite most of your application, eliminating all references to Lord of the Rings.

 

Your definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming are Incorrect, please expand on them by referring to this link [url=https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying]here for guidance.

 

 

Denied.

 

-You failed to make the needed changes within 24 hours.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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