[Denied] Lizard The Wizard's application

[Lizard The Wizard 0]

Name?: LizardTheWizard
How old are you?: 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13? Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Any User-Generated Content made in-game or posted on the forums are the intellectual property of The Lord Of The Craft for reasonable uses. Under no circumstances will we transfer, copy, or otherwise provide you with a digital copy of any structures built in-game. If you wish to appeal to this rule, please contact an Administrator.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found this server online

 

Character’s name: Eclipse 
Character’s sex: Girl
Character’s race: Dark Elves
Character’s age: 15
Biography: I was born into the shadows. My family was very sneaky and lived in the end of woods. I had a few friends but one day a few humans found us and attacked. My family and friends fought back but i and a few others survived. I wanted revenge, i wanted to kill others who killed my friends and family. One day i escaped the woods trying to find people to attack. But i met a lone baby wolf, she was a bluish wispy wolf, I took her in and named her Luna. We lived together ever since.

I forgot about the incident in the woods. I remembered it in a dream and awoke in terror. In the morning I found a man and he taught me dark magic. I remembered it and thanked the man and left. Luna and I went to a town. Nobody found out I was a dark elf. I was terrified of the people around me but i kept it under control. On the journey I met another dark elf named Necro he also wanted revenge so we teamed up.I wanted to find the people that killed my family and friends even if it is the last thing I do.   
Personality Traits: love for animals, magical, and kindness for people i know 
Ambitions: seeking revenge
Strengths/Talents: Can do dark magic and uses bow
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Memories and hurt animals
Appearance: Purple eyes, Long black hair, pale skin, and wears a armored dress with a black cape 5.5 ft and skinny 

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Your application has sadly been denied due to the some things that need to be changed. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Message me if you have any concerns! These changes need to be made in your next application: 

~Your biography doesn't include a shred of server lore. I would search through the wiki for this. This could include anything from major events, religion, or major cities in your biography in order to show you comprehend server lore well.

~No character is allowed to be made having been taught magic in the first place and especially no interaction with dark arts users. This element needs to be removed from your biography and your list of strengths too. Your list of weaknesses needs to be clarified upon to as to whether she is scared of memories or can't remember much. 

~The age of your character must be above 18 within your application for a character; in game it can be lower or higher if you wish.

~And your skin isn't present upon the application. You need to update it onto the application. I would suggest uploading the skin to imgur and placing the link on here so I can put it on and see for myself in MC (this is a last resort). Otherwise, I suggest taking a screenshot using the F2 button and then going to /run, type %appdata%, go to .minecraft, then go to screenshots in order to place the image onto your desktop, and then upload it to imgur or onto the application.

Your application is missing the definitions section required of every application. Please refer to the application format below to do such and don't plagiarize definitions:
 

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Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:

How old are you?:

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:

What is metagaming?:

What is powergaming?:

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:

Character’s sex:

Character’s race:

Character’s age:

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Personality Traits:

Ambitions:

Strengths/Talents:

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

 

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