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[Stardash 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

My Minecraft account name is Stardash702.

I am 13 years old.

I am aware of the server's 13 rating.

I have read all the servers rules and will follow them.

I agree the most with the anti Power Gaming rule as Power Gaming forces players to react in ways they may not like and thus ruin the roleplay.

I found out about the server via a You Tube video.

 

Definitions

 

Roleplay is where players can go into their own in depth story and can immerse themselves in their own Imagination.

Metagaming is using knowledge that you obtained out of character.

Powergaming is forcing a character to take a certain action.

 

In-Character Information

 

My characters name is Stardash because I've grown used to using that name in all other games.

My character is male.

My character will be a wood elf as elves are my favourite mythical creatures and wood elves are my favourite type of elf.

My character would be 18 -in living years as he spent time being dead (see backstory)-

 

Many years ago, a creature was created. It was the work of Tyrion (with the power of Rott and Freyj) who created the creature. it was an attempt to make a new weapon to bring destruction and chaos to the world so as to bring Iblees back. This creature had power in necromancy and was less susceptible to injury. It was given the form of a wood elf -creatures of peace and happiness who had long since been a target of the terror and anger of the Nether-. This would allow the creature to become part of the wood elf society, before destroying them all when the time came.

 

Tyrion grasp on Aegis was weak however, and he was unable to create a new form for his weapon. Instead, he searched the land for a pre-existing  body to hold the creature. His attention was caught by a young orphan elf. The elf was playing around with the animals -his joy making Tyrion mad with anger-. Tyrion then focussed on the boy elf and entered his mind. Once inside of the elf, it was a simple matter of suicide. Upon the elf's death, Tyrion forced his creation into the it's body. But the creature did not respond. It lacked a soul. Begrudgingly, Tyrion detached a piece of his own corrupted soul and forced it into the body. Then it woke up.

 

The 'boy' then made his way to many different societies (tending to stick to the realm of Athera where the most joy needed to be destroyed). He would become a part of them before destroying them completely.
He would find their weak points and attack with his full necromancy might. Unlike the conquerors before him however, the creature worked in secret. This lead to races and nations pinning the blame for the attacks on one another. Eventually, the creature was defeated. He had made his way into a human settlement and was spreading his chaos -like always- when something went wrong. He had not been the only one attacking. A day after he arrived, the elves struck a fatal blow to the town. The elves blamed the town for their own most recent attack -caused by the creature-. They gathered their mages and struck the town with one long blast of pure magic. The inhabitants and the buildings were obliterated -along with the creature-. The magic was strong enough so that -when Tyrion tried to revive his creation- he was blocked.

 

After the creature was gone, each race slowly began to realise their mistakes. Upon seeing that none of them were to blame for their land's destruction, they made peice. The destroyed civilisations were tainted with fear and death and so were left in ruin while their inhabitants were buried.

The creature -looking like an elf- was also buried and was left. His body did not rot due to the necromancy that had made him, but he was still dead. There he lay for thousands of years, until a new evil dawned. Archwraith Nimdravur had created a cult of dark evil necromancers intent on bringing back Iblees. They rose many dead to join their cause -some of which were risen from the many ruins in Athera. Amongst these dead, came the creature. It's soul was complex enough to take days to return -by which time the cult had moved on-.

 

Upon seeing this, Tyrion immediately tried to connect with the creature. But something blocked him. Something within the creature. Another soul. For with the creature had come the original owner of its body. The young orphan elf. His entire soul quickly became dominant above the portion of Tyrion's which still resided in the body. Coming back from being for so long had a toll on the boy. He was weak with exhaustion and his memories were weak. He still believed himself to have just been playing with those animals -all those centuries before-. Unsure of what to do, the kid would make his way towards civilisation in an attempt to learn what had happened. Meanwhile, the piece of Tyrion's soul lay in wait. It knew that once the orphan learnt what had happened -and what his body had done- his soul would simply lose all strength, and Tyrion would be back in control. He just had to wait. And if the boy ever got stuck, Tyrion could pretend to help. Get the boy's trust, then destroy him. He had it all planned out.

When the orphan soul -known as Stardash- is in control, he is happy, hopeful and innocent and tends to be ignorant of danger. When the part of Tyrion is in control, he is ruthless, evil, insane and will happily kill anyone and anything.

The Orphan soul simply wants everything to be peaceful and to learn what happened. The part of Tyrion wants to destroy the world to bring back Iblees.

As the orphan soul, he has high charisma and can talk most people out of fighting. He also takes less notice of damage. As the part of Tyrion, he is smart and ruthless and has strong necromancy powers. Both parts have high -magic induced- strength.

As the orphan, he has no fighting experience or magic and is extremely careless. As the part of Tyrion, he can easily go back to the inexperienced orphan soul at any moment, and has to make sure that the orphan soul is somewhat OK with his actions.

Stardash is a wood elf with pale skin -due to the fact that he was dead-. He is skinny and has next to no muscles. When the part of Tyrion is in control, his eyes go red.

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7804752/undead-elf/
I made this skin specifically for this server.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know the server said no special back story and no special powers, but I wanted my character to be:

A: Undead.
B: Less susceptible to damage.
C: Have a good and bad personality.
D: Be brand new to the world.
E: Have an evil personality with necromancy.

The only way I could find to do all this was with the above backstory.

I tried to compensate for that by making my character less wise. By making my character have no experience. And by only having the ability of necromancy for extremely short periods. My character also doesn't know about their own backstory and chances are that he never will. To any outside viewers:
My character is just an abnormally pale elf who is somehow quite strong and less susceptible to pain. And my character has short random phases where he goes crazy and powerful for some reason.

This backstory is just to explain why my character can do these things. This is probably not aloud but if it isn't, could you recommend a possible backstory which would fit in the above whilst staying within the server rules?

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

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Unfortunately you cannot play an undead character, whether or not you want to.

There is also no such entity called 'Tyrion' capable of creating creatures like you described.

You cannot have any form of magic (including necromancy) in your bio, and need to learn it from a proper teacher in-game.

Your backstory is far too grandiose and effectual on the world around you. You cannot claim to have been involved in the destruction of settlements or anything that big.

 

My advice to you is simply to make a normal character with a normal upbringing. The simple fact of the matter is you cannot be a big, bombastic, flashy character right from the get-go. The point of LOTC is that you need to reach that point through actually progressing your character in the game itself.

[WuHanXianShi14 0]

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