application [Denied] taette - application cave dwarf

[taette 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: taette
How old are you?: 26
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes i read them all and i agree them.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That we want a pure RP experience and for this: "Excessive trolling or use of 'memes' in roleplay are disallowed."
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, thank you everything is quite clear.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?
I was looking for a really good RP-Server and found it with google. Its the first time for me that i play on a RP server but i played a lot of with my thoughts before i searched for one.

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: For me is roleplaying the impersonification of playing a game as a totally different character than in the normal life. I will completely smelt with my character in the game and his background story. So it doesnt cares who am i in the normal world because i exist and live in the RP-World after i press the join button.
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is a ban reason for me. You now something (OOC) out of character and use your knowledge to grief/ kill / ... and so on. 
What is powergaming?: Powergaming are unrealistic situations like. An invincible hero which fights alone against hordes of enemies without dieing.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Styrvarr Thengill
Character’s sex: male
Character’s race: dwarf subrace: cave dwarf
Character’s age: 47
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Oz, my nak thorok oz meet othok. Tha Styrvarr Thengill. K 47years old and mine is k life keep in the mine. Tha dont often go out of my mine. It's oz home. K don't have a women or kids. All k do is for tha. Every morning thas everyday beoir everything is good and k mine. tha quiet person. k like it more to listen to others, but if tha mine for myself alone its good - kazahar.
Personality Traits: disciplined, hard-working, self-controlled, quiet, cautious
Ambitions: if his everyday beoir is served everything is good
Strengths/Talents: determined
Weaknesses/Inabilities: harshly and unkind in the morning
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): i'm 4.9ft tall and i weight around 172pounds. I'm red bearded and wearing all the time my shineless mining suit. but it fits perfect for years of mining. i really like my stuff to put on, because its easy to clean and fits perfect.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/G5I1irD.png

[rathat 868]

-You have been denied for the following reasons-

 

I physically cannot read your biography, it sounds like a drunken orc.

Your biography is too short! Please make it a decent two paragraphs long

Your characters waknesses are not weaknesses, but more of a personality trait.

 

[rathat 868]

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