[Denied] My RP Character: Lila

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Lila_rose

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:the no trolling rule

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: i was watching an video from Gizzy Gazza,

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: playing as your own character in a story line

What is metagaming?: metagaming is a mix of OOC and IC. OOC is out of character thats when you want to have plain fun grind on NPC's and stuff. IC is in character thats when you start roleplaying. so if my RP name is Lila and they call me by my normal name is Metagaming

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is forcing actions against another player. as so if in real life you would not instantly kill someone take their money and walk away, so you dont do that in roleplay.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Lila

Character’s seks:Female

Character’s race:Elf

Character’s age:124

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Lila's Father was a guard on middle Asulon but he broke his arm when another guard that didn't like him much attackt him, but the people liked the other guard so he tricked the others to hate her father. and so they wanted him to go. the traveld until he arrived at a lake in Anthos. he sat down and there he saw a beautifal woman who was hunting,Lila's mother. they sticked together and started to like each other. the people of Anthos never accepted Lila's father because he stopt with his job as guard and they didn't believe the only reason he stopt was his broken arm. so they moved in the forest from Anthos there Lila and her brother were born. there parents learned her brother everything about hunting, but they didn't want Lila to know any thing about hunting cause its to dangerous. But at night when there Parents were asleep her brother learned her everything she needed to know about hunting. but then on an hunting trip her family got killed by a group of bears. Lila was home alone cause her brother told her to stay. after a long time waiting she decided to search for them. and then she saw her family lying dead on the ground covert in blood she cryed herself  asleep. when she woke up she decided to travel far away from the place where her family got killed. Always alone never trusting any one and nowhere she stayed longer then two days. but then in Asulon she met  a guy his name was Tarian he was a jong elf three years older then her. he had beautifal blue eyes and brown hair. he looked trustworthy and he rediated security and confidence. she decided to stay with him. he impressed her every day with his braveness and love. she stayed 7 years with him in the forest in Asulon. they were thinking about getting merried and having children but then on an hunting trip he got killed by a man with a bow. he looked at her and aimed when she had tears in her eyes she run to the tree where the man was sitting she climbed up with so much anger and killed him with her knife. she was so angry at him that she trow him out of the tree. when she climbed out she saw so many people around her, they looked at her as she was a monster everywhere she heard awfull words. the anger was replaced with fear she run away and never came back. she turned back to the place where she and her family lived, Anthos. she only goes outside for food. scared for people, people who think she is a monster. that made her to the person she is know scared for people..

Personality Traits: she is Fast so she can Always flee without any one notice.

Ambitions:clear her name. so people see her as a good person. not a monster..

Strengths/Talents:hunting and sneaking around. killing with a Knife

Weaknesses/Inabilities:she cant swim and she is realy fast scared. and she is realy bad with the bow

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): she has long brown hair and blue eyes. a little nose and soft lips. she is 1.78 and her weight is 72k

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

-Please expand on your roleplaying definition

-Your Metagaming definitions is very confusing and wrong

Here is a guide to help you. Make sure to put everything in your own words:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

-Your character is simply too young for the events in your biography. 

It is unrealistic that your character would be able to climb up a tree and kill a man that already was aiming a bow at her.

We were forced to leave Asulon because of a series of natural disasters

We left Anthos due to a flood in 1457

We are currently in Vailor!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

-Please give your character more personality traits

 

-1.78 meters (5'10) is too short for an elf.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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