[Denied] [Pending] Application 3

[Fritz of Greenmore 7]

Third time's the charm!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: fritzthebold

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: It is a good idea to ensure that characters cannot be overpowered. The game would be boring.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):  No questions here!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend recommended the server to me.

 

 

What is roleplaying?: A mix of acting and gaming in which you take on the character of your choice

What is metagaming?: Collection of stategies, tips and rules conrcerning a game

What is powergaming?: a style of interatction with a game

 

Character’s name: Fritz of Greenmore

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: elf

Character’s age: 148 (31 years old to a human)

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): See below

Personality Traits: Optimistic and clever. Can be surprisingly patient, studying and working at a task for days on end. Knows how to solve problems by searching for a new angle.

Ambitions: training in magic; mastering lore

Strengths/Talents: knows a lot about blacksmithing. a good fighter, having spent much of his life practising against real opponents who are actually trying to kill him.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Fritz is sometimes too empathetic. He hesitates to kill an opponent.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): A tall, light, spindly, ragged-looking elf with untamed hair and crazed eyes. Wears dark clothes in order to melt into the woods.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): see bottom

 

  Fritz of Greenmore is a half-blood elf. His mother, an elf, died shortly after his birth took place in a cave in the valley of Rivendell where they sheltered during a night raid by Orcs bearing banners of the Witch-King of Angmar when he made his attack upon the valley in TA 1409. He has never known his father. Alone, raised by wolves and afraid, Fritz had no contact with the world of men, elves or dwarves until nine years had passed. He was found with a hunting wolf pack, when a little hunting party of men captured him to determine who and what he could be. He was brought to speak the tongues of men, along with his native elvish.

 

  In time, he decided to make his way to the Village of Greenmore. On the way, an encounter with a Warg pack cost him his left leg. Luckily, he was rescued quickly, and grew to adulthood working as a smithy in the village. He has established a stronghold at Tintallë's Ghyll, Tintallë meaning the Kindler.

 

  Often called the Green Wanderer, Fritz likes to be where important events are happening. He has spent much of his life studying the lore of middle-earth. He can speak a multitude of languages and is currently training in magic. His happy place is a fortress with a nice forge and a great big library. He spends much of his time also in Ker'nor for various trading and adventurous purposes.

 

  At the age of 148 (31 in human years), Fritz  has adopted a daughter found abandoned in the woods. He named the elven child Stamina, and she is now roughly 6 years old to a human.

 

  Fritz is a survivor. He lives by the sword and shield, and goes wherever his fate shall lead him. He has seen many battles in his time, and he knows there are many more to come. Fritz is of those whose sees the best in life, and strives to help those who need it.

  Fritz is often disdained by other elves for his ragged appearance and rough life. He will of course in turn call them stuck up pretty boys as often and loudly as he can. In truth, he does not really care.

 

  To the core, Fritz is a guardian. A guardian of Middle-Earth, defending the lands from the gathering Darknesses. A guardian of the poor, helping the people survive. A guardian of his friends and family, protecting them from harm as best he can.

 

 

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Spoiler

 

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

-You have forgotten to add the definitions

 

-Your biography is lacking in lore:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

Please redo your biography based on the link above. 

 

-There are no dragons in LotC

 

 

If you want help or need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

 

 

You did not make the necessary corrections in the allotted time

 

You may reapply in 12 Hours

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