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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Mr_Shnebly

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:War

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):none

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My brother - Wolfdog96

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing a character or role and acting how that character would rather than how you would

What is metagaming?: using outside info to better youself in a roleplaying situation that your character doesn't/wouldn't know

What is powergaming?: Making your character op or having them do something they couldn't, a peasant picking up a sword and kill a whole army

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Gilfrid

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age:18

I lived in a small village near Istria with my mother and father. My mother stayed home and did house work while my father worked as a lumberjack. we had little money but it was enough to get by. The tax collectors would come every month and take what little money we had. I would watch as my father begged them not to take so much, but it never helped. In my free time I would play games with my friends, and pretend to be mighty warriors from the past. One day, some how the plague that first started in 1526 reached my mother. Her suffering brought great pain to our family. I felt powerless, and thought that if we just have enough money, we could pay someone to help. I tried going into town to find a doctor, and when one did come, all they said was that she had very little time. A few days later my father caught it, and a week after that my mother pasted, then my father. I hated how I could do nothing for them, and how I had to bury them myself, I blamed myself. I sold the house, took what I had, and went to start a new life, away from my past.

 

Personality Traits:Courageous, Honest, Rational

Ambitions: Become rich and powerful

Strengths/Talents: Planning,  Athletic

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Disloyal, Callous

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): height 6 3 Weight 185

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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Pending.

 

Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the dukes war in Vailor!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

 

 

You have twenty four hours to make this edit - you do not need you make a second post! Just edit it! Be sure to contact me once you make these changes. Please be sure to PM me once your edits are complete.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

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