[Denied] Application Please approve this was sent on 1/03/2016

[CoolLegion 0]

I put spaces so u can read easier 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s the name of the Minecraft account you're applying for?: - CoolLegion
What's your MAIN Minecraft Account name?:- CoolLegion
 
Do you agree to follow the rules on your new account?: yes
Do you understand you can not be on both of these accounts at once?: yes
Do you understand that if one account is banned, so will the other(s)?: yes
How long have you been on LoTC?: about an hour :/
How many accounts do you currently have whitelisted?: 0
 
 

What is roleplaying?: A mix of acting and gaming in which you take on the character of your choice

What is metagaming?: in-game, mathematics-based interaction with a game. Originally used in a millitary function. 

Whiat is powergaming?: in online role-playing, a powergaming character being created way too powerful and not needing to develop any skills, on when one player declares his attack or whatever else successful without ever giving the other player a chance to defend or counterattack

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 

 

Character’s name: Osniir

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: Dwarf

 

Character’s age: 24

 

Biography : He was an orphan adopted by a lonely merchant who taught him how to be sell and produce food by the age of 20 his merchant farther died from a orc. he made an oath that day that he would get

vengeance for his farther and he started his journey learning the arts of war from his kind training preparing for 4 years he trained untill the day he finished his training and set off on his adventure.....

 

Personality Traits: Fierce,Adventurous,brave and Kind

 

Ambitions: Vengeance for his Farther and to find his real family 

 

Strengths/Talents: Farming Selling and good training

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Clumsy, Will take breaks,Food

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 4ft and 120 Ibs

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): im new but im pretty sure i attached it                                Hope i get approved :P

Edited March 1, 2016 by CoolLegion
Forgot to Click notify

[tilly 5115]

Denied.

 

• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the dukes war in Vailor!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

 

You may reapply in six hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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