[Denied] Applying to LotC

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:My minecraft account is under the name of TFWPKYorIwill

 

How old are you?:I am 13 years of age

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am aware this is a very pg-13 server

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:I have read the rules

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I agree there should be no trolling or breaking server lore

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: I don't question the rules

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found out about LotC from looking for good, solid rpg servers on minecraft

 

What is roleplaying?:role play is taking the role of a character, when in roleplay, you are not you, and you think, act, and feel like the character you are playing

 

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which breaks or overuses the ruleset

 

What is powergaming?: Power gaming is when you aim for a certain goal but will put other aspects of the game, such as roleplay, out of the way to obtain the goal.

 

Character’s name:I want my characters name to be Leo.

 

Character’s sex:sex is male.

 

Character’s race: race is elven.

 

Character’s age:My character is 21 years old

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): A young Elf determined to rise to greatness and secure his spot in history. His ultimate goal is to achieve peace across Aegis and to help bring the four races together. Leo was found abandoned in The Wilds by a wandering Dwarf. This kind Dwarf took Leo in and cared for him until he was ten years old, teaching him the Dwarven language and lore. Upon his eleventh birthday, the Dwarf brought Leo to the borders of the Holy Princedom of Malinor, where he left Leo in the care of the first elf he found. After being taught the elven language, Leo improved his skill as an archer and swordsman, and also proved to be incredibly bright. He has risen from nothing to become an important figure in the Elven world, and hopes to continue this rise into the whole of Aegis.

 

Personality Traits:He is kind but also brave, he is sometimes selfish but other times gives much for others.

 

Ambitions:He loves fighting and archery.

 

Strengths/Talents:His talents are in archery.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: weakness is self doubt, he sometimes wonders if he is doing his best.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): He is 6' 9" and weighs 139 pounds. He has black hair with stunning blue eyes but usually covers his face in a mask of white and a jacket of blue. he caries weapons on his back and side for safekeeping.

[Corvoo 562]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

-Your metagaming definition is plagiarized. Changing one or two words from the definition found on another site does not make it your own definition. Please keep this in mind next time.

 

-Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.
 Explain your character in detail.

-Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.
 
Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.
 
 
You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Corvoo 562]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.