[Denied] Aplication

[Tower_Pyro 21]

 What’s your Minecraft account name?:XxDjKittenxX

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes I am aware

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No Hostile or Toxic Behavior

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:YouTube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):N/A

 

 

 

 

What is roleplaying?:When you assume the role of another character, living their life, and making their decisions

What is metagaming?:A strategy used that includes out of game knowledge to help you in game

What is powergaming?:Doing something you cant do ingame or thats
unfair.

 

 

Character’s name: Umbra Inflammable the Necromancer

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: Twenty-Seven

Biography  Lives in felsen oren was Born in 1520 after the Dwarven  civil war His Dad was a guard his family had problems with food and houseing so they went to live with a friend for a while when his family was assisinated and he was left Alone in the forest this brought him to go mad and learn the Dark arts he was so opssesed he sacrificed his dog after this
his Step father who adopted him he  fought in the battle of the forest
And the Dukes war butBut when the war happend he got his finger sliced by a dwarven war axe the young child killed his step dad and has ever stayed Since his Crazynesss in felsen noone knows who killed His step dad But the child Dident care. He later found out in 1537 That he had a long lost brother that was kidnapped so he sent out to find him his brother was being taken care of by a little orc settlement while the orenian empire was besiegeing the dwarven fort Rhewengrad A few Hours later The dwarven Fort falls And Has always wanted to go  to Salvus allthough tge place is small hes always wanted to meet someone thats far away       

Personality Traits: Homiciadal Shy gloomy Likes Rain dislikes Dwarves

Ambitions: Necromancer

Strengths/Talents: Free running Dagger Throwing

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hand issues 1 of his fingers got cut off by a dwarven War axe.

Appearance: 5.7 No scars 100 Pounds

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

[Corvoo 562]

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

 

-You cannot start the server already knowing a magic. At this point I'm unsure if you're stating that your character knows Necromancy or not.

 

-The fact that your character was left out in the forest and 'went crazy and wants to learn a dark art' doesn't make much sense. It's also rather cliche. Why did being left out in the forest suddenly make him want to learn a dark art? How did he know about dark arts in the first place. I'd suggest either re-thinking your character entirely, or just rewriting the biography to make more sense.

 

-Your character is very overpowered. Please work on balancing out your strengths and weaknesses. Free-running isn't something that is very feasible as well. 
 
Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.
 
 
You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Corvoo 562]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.