[Denied] [Denied] [Pending] Application

[silmar01 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:silmar01

How old are you?:46

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:No hacking it ruins all the fun

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: GizzyGazza's video

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):Iv'e never been on a whitelisted server before

Character name:Silmereth

Character's sex:male

Character's race:human

Characters age:18

What is Roleplaying:use your imagination to create a dream character that you play as

What is metagaming: Your dream character knows only of outside knowledge

What is power-emoting (power-gaming):making someone do an action so like if i say i stab "Gizzeth" he will accept what happened

Biography:I used to be named Silmar.I lived at Washington D.C.One day,everything changed.I lived in a little place,not to shabby.I was originally born in Georgia.So,there i was,walking down with my friends,like usual.We went to find abandoned houses.I ran off once my friends dissapered.I serched every were.Finnaly,I got older.I worked harder.I found then.They brang me to a portal that brang me to the place I am now.Lord Of The Craft.We traveled far and wide.We fought a dragon and other monsters.It was a blast.But one day,that portal closed.My friends escaped,I sacraficed.Everything gone.I was left alone.But,that would never stop me.I found a town.Made new friends.I eventually moved into a town.Hallowvale.It was cold,but cozy.My NEW friends were Nafis Yar,Oliver de Savoie,and Guy de Bar.We witnessed many wars.We were 15 7 by that time.I remember the war they died.The war again War Uzg.That time,I was scared of the world.Its dangerous.At that time,I grew up at Hallowvale.I celebtated my own birthdays.I am now 18.There i was alone,and this is were my epic adventure awaits,to save Gizzeth,and be a hero.

Personality traits:smart hamdsome heroic

Ambitions:To be a hero

Streanths/Talents:He is good at fighting and getting girls

Weakness/Inabilities:Being reminded about the "past"

Appearance:Black hair Blue eyes 5,9 ft tall no scars

Skin:  http://imgur.com/6VESjy8

Edited March 27, 2016 by silmar01
I forgot something sorry<now i need to add more lore

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

• You are missing the three definition questions in your application, please fill them out.

 

What is roleplaying?:

 

What is meta-gaming?:

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: 

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial. Please PM me if you have any inquiries on your app or if you have completed the three definition questions. Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

Additionally,

 

• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the dukes war in Vailor!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or Tom, or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

 

Your Application has sadly been DENIED!

 

This app is so close to acceptance, however I feel a few changes could be made. Let me just walk you through a few suggestions so the next app you post will be worthy of acceptance!

 

Firstly, you cannot bring real-life locations such as Washington D.C or Georgia into your application, nor can you do this in-game. Georgia and Washington D.C do not exist whatsoever in the LoTC universe. As well, travelling through a portal to another world is not possible, please refrain form using this in your next app.

 

Secondly, I implore you to expand on your back-story after removing the real-life locations. Make sure to add both lore and depth, make it both interesting and unique. I suggest you look at the Wiki, it'll help with lore in your biography.

 

Thirdly, your three definitions are wrong please refer to these three links:

ROLEPLAYING

META-GAMING

POWER-EMOTING

Please study these definitions and put them into your own words on your next app- plagiarism is not tolerated on Lord of The Craft! If you plagiarize, you will receive a warning- if you do so again, you'll receive a 1 week ban from applying.

 

Fourthly, I would suggest you work on your grammar and punctuation for your next app. This isn't totally needed for a good app, however, it is suggested you improve upon this.

 

If you need any help whatsoever, I am a message away. Please, feel free to message me on the forums any time and I will help you with whatever you're having trouble with. I wish you the best of luck in your next application, Silmar.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

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