[Denied] my apllication

[bloodface2001 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: bloodface2001

How old are you?: 21

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes i did

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: that you cant hack or something like that because that ruíns the server

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): i dont know

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: that the player that you maded looks just like you want and have their feelings their own way and have a own way of living

What is metagaming?: that you can be someone else not yourself but a differnt person in game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: that is that you need to win and have everything just because you want it or that you want to be the best and not having fun

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) romano

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) dark elves

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) my character comes from sancuary he stayed in his land to become a great and strong dark elf but everyone tought that he was weak so he killed a lot of people in his own village he was banned from his own village so hi travelled to courland when he came there he getted some friends and become stronger there and his dream was to become so strong that he could be the leader of his old village

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) he like's darkness and he like's to see what people do to calculate their attacks and when they dont look he assasanate them in the back or whit a spell and no one see it comming my character don't like light and happiness only he can be happy.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) he wants to be the greatest assasain and he wants to beat his old village and assasinate everyone he lik's to kill and on a way that they can't see it comming he is very smart and loves traps and staying in the darkness while attacking.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) he lik's to make booby traps and he can be invisible he has quik and smart attacks he lik's a bow and spells to assasinate other people he liks to kills people from behind but he is weak when it com's to close range comebad

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) he needs to work very hard to have spells and can master his spells.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) he have a skar trough his eye and he always have his mask on he is not very tall and not very short his hair is dark and his eye colors are black

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Readicti 902]

Unfortunately your application is being denied. You may re-apply in 24 hours. While you are waiting to re-apply, to the time to go through the comments bellow and work on your application some more. These comments are to help guide you so that you may be accepted next time you apply.

• Metagaming definition is incorrect.
• Power emoting definition is incorrect. You seem to be looking at powergaming instead of power emoting. 
• You do not indicate your character's age.
• Your biography is a little short, try including some of these ideas into it: How did your character grow up? Why did everyone think he was weak? Why would he kill people in his village? How did he learn to fight? Did he feel guilt for killing people that would be close to him? How was he banned from his village? Why did he go to Courland? Who were his friends and how did they meet? What does he like to do with his friends? How did he train to become stronger? Why does he want to lead his own village? 
• Personality: Why does he like the dark? How did he come to the realization that he wanted to be an assassin? Did something happen in his life to cause him to be that way? How did he learn to make traps? 
• Also going with personality, what he likes is not really a personality. Try to think of what he acts like. Is he shy? Outgoing? How does he act around other people?
• Ambitions: Try to talk about why he wants to be a great assassin in your biography. Liking to kill other people is not an ambition, so I'd recommend taking the rest of that information out. It seems like it would fit better in the biography.
• Knowing how to go invisible and knowing magic/spells is against the rules. If you want to learn magic, you'll need to make a magic application and find a teacher on the server. 
• Weaknesses: try to think of some personality weaknesses, not magic since it's against the rules. Is he scared of something? Try to think of a weakness that cannot be so easily overcome. Examples being: scared of the dark. scared of spiders. inability to talk to other people.
• Try to expand your character's personality past just wanting to assassinate and kill people. While this can be fun to do, there is more depth to the character than that. Try to think of who he is around his friends and what he's like when he's not trying to kill people.
• While you have the time, try to work on your spelling and grammar within the application. It makes going through the application easier, as it is hard to read at times. You can do this by putting it into a Google Doc or on Word and the program will highlight spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. 

Overall, you need to work on your biography, read the server lore on our wiki, and go through the server rules once more. If you have any questions, feel free to send me a message on the forums and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

Edited March 31, 2016 by Readicti

[Readicti 902]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.