[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Application for Tormag

[Krajeek 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Krajeek

How old are you?: 39

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Metagaming is disallowed in its entirety

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No plants underground? How do the Cave Dwarves make food if all food is farmed on the surface?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend referred me

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Assuming the role of a character - becoming that character in your mind.

What is metagaming?: Using OOC information IC.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Trying to win or play a character that wouldn't realistically exist in the world you're creating

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Tormag Gemgazer

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Forest Dwarf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 52

Biography:

Tormag is the name that the Cave Dwarves gave a Forest Dwarf that they found abandoned in the scorched aftermath of a druid's circle. He grew up in the massive underground city of Kal'Akash thinking that he was the runt of the litter, and the kids would call him cruel names such as 'Fair-skin'. Although his adoptive parents tried their best to help him, he felt more and more alone in the deep caves of his home.

  As he grew older, Tormag further separated from his siblings. He took an interest in agriculture over mining, though he feels the calls of greed and adventure as much as any dwarf. He also seeks to understand the mechanics of Redstone and master it. Time will only tell whether Tormag will be reunited with his Forest Dwarf brothers, or if he'll believe that he's a runt his whole life.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Prefers solitude and raising animals and plants.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Would like to master Redstone mechanics

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) More intellectual and reserved, enjoys puzzles.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Feels outcast from the Cave Dwarves and is timid in combat.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Tormag has fair skin and brown eyes. He has some scars from the cruel pranks the others in his village would torment him with, but he keeps them covered up by a long-sleeve shirt.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

Edited April 3, 2016 by Krajeek
Changed background info now that I've had time to read more about Dwarves.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your application has been put on PENDING.

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

Firstly, I need you to add more lore to your biography. By lore, I mean historical events that transpired in the past in either one of our realms (Aegis, Asulon, Anthos, Athera, Vailor); adding Dwarven cities into your biography- such as Kal'Urguan, etc. I'll link you to our wiki, I suggest you go through some Dwarven history and integrate it into your biography.

 

WIKI LINK

 

Secondly, this is a small change, on our server we do not have 'Redstone Magic'- instead, it would make more sense for your character wanting to delve into 'Redstone Mechanics'. I suggest you change that.

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me to.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Your Application has been ACCEPTED!

 

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait patiently as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

 

An absolutely astonishing application, Krajeek! I can't wait to see you in-game, if you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message on the forums or on Skype (thomascovey1181). Enjoy your adventures in Vailor!

[Tom_Whiteman 949]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Fireheart 2777]

Player Whitelisted.