[Denied] ChiWen's application

[ChiWen 4]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:ChampionGreen
How old are you?:15
Are you aware the server is PG-13 :I understand
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have 
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Powergaming being disallowed 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? :No there are not
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was watching a youtube video about it after hearing about it from friends
What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is when someone takes a role and acts as someone else
What is metagaming?: The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for personal gain or advantage.
What is power-emoting ?: Forcing someone to die like "chiwen kills 'name'"
to past Whitelist Applications :N/A
Character’s name: Scars Ives 
Character’s sex:  Male
Character’s race: Highlander
Character’s age: 28
Biography  Ives was born in a distant land that is unknown. no one knows what his birth name is but the nickname he was given was after a long hard war. The war was a bloody one but he managed to get away with many scars made his way to a village. people asked where him came from and what he did to get the scars, however he stayed quite. The man was tall and slender he had brown hair and yellow eyes and when he talked there was a mask that covered his mouth.
His family however differed from him Ivor the great was his father. Ivor was the strongest man in his homeland and still is. His mother lily (after the flower) was the most beautiful lady of the isle. She was with a baby when he was sent away for stealing. Ives did not know that his mother gave birth maybe that would have changed his actions but now he is know there as the Thief of Black Isles.
Personality Traits: He is a respectful man to everyone but however steals from those he hates. He is not scared to put up a fight his past taught him to be brave and stick up for himself. He doesn't ask for handouts he works and earns. dislikes when people ask him for stuff (like food,and water)
Ambitions: He wants to be like his father strong a wife and two children That's all he ever wanted. 
Strengths/Talents: His main talents are fighting, and stealing.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: He needs to stop stealing to be like his father.
Appearance: He is a Strong man with brown hair and yellow eyes. The scars are bellow all the hide he made hunted and skinned
Skin: 

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your metagaming definition is plagiarised. This is against the rules and your first and final warning. If you are seen plagiarising again, you will receive a ban from applying for a period of time.

 

• Your power-emoting definition is partially incorrect. Please expand upon this with the use of our wiki page, though be sure to put it into your own words.

 

• Your biography contains no server lore. Please add at least three points of lore.

 

• Your character would not have been born in a distant land. Instead, he would have been born in the current in-game world called Vailor. Look at this page for information on it.

 

• You say your character was in a long hard war. Which war was that? There are several that have happened which you could use as lore in your biography.

 

• There is no such place as 'The Black Isles' and so your character cannot be known as the thief of it.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

[Chamosial 379]

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