[Denied] Amelia3352 Application

[Amelia3352 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Amelia3352

BY THE WAY! I am really sorry for the weird colorings and stuff. It was kinda just like that. Forgive me.

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yup.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Of course! C:

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: One about memes. They're okay once or twice but then they get really annoying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope. It's all clear.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Video on Youtube.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Nope.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Lyanna

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) My character was born in a small village in the Kingdom of Vandoria and lost a mother almost immediately after birth. Her and her father became too poor to keep their home and became travelers, wandering and looking for money or food. It was dangerous, and after one wrong move of wandering into a group of orcs not far from Gundz'koth, the orcs took her father as a threat and stabbed him to death while she watched.

She grew up, wanting to avenge her father, her last guidance. She eventually ended up with no place to call home. Just sleeping in woods, or abandoned huts around Felsen.

 

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Dislikes:Orcs Likes:Nature

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) She wishes to conquer the orcs. Besides that she secretly wishes to be a war general.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Swords.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Archery.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) They are average in height for their age, Long red hair, Green eyes.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

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[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• You have failed to include your definitions entirely. Please use the correct format that includes the definitions, here.

 

• Your biography is too short. Please expand upon this and make it the size of two decent paragraphs. It is also rather cliche for orcs to kidnap a parent and for a character to wish revenge upon them. Try and think of something more original.

 

• You state that your character has green eye yet on your skin it has red eyes. Your skin needs to reflect your character appearance.

 

You may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

[Chamosial 379]

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