[Denied] Application

[ocat 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?:ocatgink1234
How old are you?:16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?:
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: suching for servers 
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):https://minecraft-server-list.com/sort/RP/page/2/
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?:when u act as someone your not
What is metagaming?:when u use info outdide of your characters life and use it as guideance
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:doing something your character wouldn't normaly be able to do
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Suxir
Character’s sex: (male or female?) male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Dark elf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 37
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)
Suxir grew up in a female-dominated socity, as dark elves do. He was not the top of
his class, nor was he the bottom. He passed under the radar of his peers for a lage portion of his young life.
He had joined a group of his peers that were looking into particle study and manipulation. Suxir
was the first to discover the 'ethyr particle'. This particle allowed dark elves to physically 
rip apart an item, although keep it together as a 'whole'. Shortly after this discovery, the plans
were stolen by a rivla house, which caused the Aeon of White Shadow to begin. Suxir, discoverer of the patticle,
knew the most of it, and using that knowledge he and his house were able to begin and wage war. This war wiped out
nearly the entire population of Dark Elves. with nowhere left to run, he fled to the surface,
knowing well that he woulf die if he stayed below.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Likes: traviling food helping dislikes: FIGHTING
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) god
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) using a bow 
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) using a sword
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) black hair no scars avrege hight 
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) i couldn't get it to work sorry :(  

[Corvoo 562]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]
 
Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

-Your powergaming definition is rather vague. Please work on explaining that bit more further.

 

-Your characters biography has little to no server lore. Please visit our wiki located here. To brush up on more of our lore, and get more familiar with things. Then add some of said lore into your characters biography.

 

-Your characters single ambition is just 'god'. Please expand on this section, as this honestly doesn't make much sense.

 

-You must have a screenshot of the skin you wish to use. Please use the screenshot guide located here, to learn how to upload a screenshot.
 
 
You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Corvoo 562]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.