[Denied] [Pending] Thijmen3333's Application

[thijmen3333 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: thijmen3333

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yesWhat’s the rule you agree with the most?: the rule about Hostile and Toxic behaviour
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No, not really

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I searched the Minecraft server list for 'Roleplay' servers

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): not there?!

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the name of a quite large variety of games, in which players forfill a specific role as a specific character

What is metagaming?: Using out-of-game information to effect the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: overpowering your character: (he is able to destroy an entire army by himself)

 

In-Character Information
 

Character’s name: Tsiilmas

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Elven

Character’s age: 116 years old

Biography: Tsiilmas was born in the city of Lin'everal, as the only son of a weaponsmith called Mairel and his wife Keerla. He had a normal youth, learning about life and helping out his dad at the workshop. at the age of 57, Tsiilmas left home to seek fortune in the city of Lin'sulan. It was here that he developed his skills, and especially his negotiating skills, solving arguements between his (often drunk) friends.

 

Soon, Tsiilmas found himself working as blacksmith, forging decorational pieces and weapons for the people of Lin'sulan. Due to his job, he became a beloved man, with little enemies. Still, he felt this wasn't the life for him, and he started to follow the silver council. He was sure this was the life for him, but is it achieveable?

 

Personality Traits: patient, easy-going, loves helping others and feeling like he can change the world.

Ambitions: Reaching the silver council

Strengths/Talents: Marksmanship, negotiation, climbing, forging

Weaknesses/Inabilities: sword fighting, ancient elven language

Appearance: Blue eyes, Blonde/platinum Hair, 7'3 tall, athletic posture

Skin: see attached file

Edited May 8, 2016 by thijmen3333
made a mistake

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application is pending for the following reasons:

 

• Your biography is too short. Please expand upon this and make it the size of two decent paragraphs. Look at the links below to help you with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

• Your character wouldn't have just left home to go to Lin'sulan as the two cities are in different realms, many years apart from each other. I suggest that you read up on the lore a little more closely and perhaps look at the events that brought descendants from one realm to another to help write your biography.

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. Failure to do so will result in denial of this application. Please PM me once the changes have been completed.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me also.

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Applicant failed to make the requested changes.

 

You may re-apply in 12 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

[Chamosial 379]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.