[Denied] [Pending] DoctorVin application

[DoctorVin 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: DoctorVin

How old are you?: 15 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The one about power gaming it would give someone a big advantage over the other.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend told me about it, I was looking for a good rp server.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): none

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is about, a player, playing a certain role. mostly doing this rather consciously, for an example, I could decide to rp a bandit, of my free will

What is metagaming?: Using information that your character does not have, in irp. as explained above, it would grant one a great advantage over the others, of using info gathered from a non-rp context.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Simple! power gaming, would be forcing someone into an action, like making him die (*chops his head off*)=(*Attempts to chop off his head*)

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Drasstar

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Uruk

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 45 years old,

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Drasstar lived in a small cave with a few other orc hunters. Drasstar spent is time hunting in the sand of the Uzg. Unfortubatly, all the other members of his hunting party we're slain by an angry Scabbernack. And so, he then had to travel to the great Orcish city of the Uzg. There he spend is time telling of his tale. Drasstar also spend is time worshipping the spirits of his ancestors. He hopes to venge his fallen friends, and upgrade his hunting skills.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He likes hunting, he likes raw sheep, his weapons of choice are his curved sword and war axe, he also enjoys bows. He can be easily angered, and of a vengeful mind. Yet he is a rather peaceful orc and does not encourage violence... well, to a certain point.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Hw wants to be one of the biggest orcish hunters of the Uzg.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) A blacksmith, and as said up, a great hunter

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Since he is an orc, he is rather stupid. He also speaks very badly. Even Blah. He will often underestimate his foe, and will value peace rather than war.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He is a dark green colors, he his very tall but thin but strong.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide http://imgur.com/nzSXTZC.)

 

 

 

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application is pending for the following reasons:

 

• Your biography is too short. Please expand upon it and make it the length of two decent sized paragraphs.

 

• Your biography does not contain enough server lore. Please make sure to include at least three references to lore. Look at the links below for some help with this.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Orcs

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Uruks

 

You have 24 hours to make the requested changes. Failure to do so will result in denial of this application. Please PM me once you have completed making the changes.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me also.

 

[Chamosial 379]

 

This application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

• Applicant failed to make requested changes.

 

You may re-apply in 12 hours.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me.

 

[Chamosial 379]

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