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[Denied] My Whitelist Application (Amber05)

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General Questions:

What’s your Minecraft account name?:

x_Water_x

How old are you?:

15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Yes, but it doesn't bother me at all.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

I completely agree with them.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

I am quite fond of the no trolling and use of excessive memes as I find trollers very tedious.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

No I completely understand them all.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:

I found out via searching “Lord of the Rings server” on google.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

I have none, I am afraid.

Definitions;

What is role playing?:

Acting or Pretending to be someone else for one's own pleasure or benefit.

What is metagaming?:

A strategy that allows a game to advance past it's given limits, rules and way of playing it.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:

Is the a method where one can achieve a goal at the fastest possible

 

In-Character Information:

Character’s name:

Arlayna Roren

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)

Elf (High Elf)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)

Over 2000 (I checked the wiki and website and could not find the current date).

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)  

Arlayna Roren was born on the 14th of may 1507. She was born into wealthy family in Lin’evaral. Her family moved there after the destruction of Asulon. She was an only child and quite privileged. Her father was a merchant and her mother was just a simple maiden. However, her mother had a secret life as a mage, and accommodated the power to move things with her mind. Therefore, Arlayna inherited this unique gift once her mother died.

 

Arlayna always wanted to travel from a young age. She wished to scale the dwarven mountains and see the world from the Human towers. But her father disagreed. But when the High elves left Lin’evaral, her father and mother were killed by Orc bandits. Luckily, Arlayna survived as her mother protected her with her magic. After that melancholic day Arlayna traveled the world seeking guidance and counselling. She searched far and wide for a mage, who could teach her to develop and enhance her abilities. She now lives in Lin’sulan working as a gardener.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)

Arlayna is a very charismatic and outgoing person. She sometimes can be perceived as a snob, but is generally like by most. She loves animals and nature, and really enjoys a good book. She is quite talented musically and loved theatrical events. However she dislikes dishonest people and hates cowards. She is brave, loyal and honest. But at times her bravery can cause her to seem arrogant. She can also come across very flirtatious and alluring.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)

She wishes to find true love, master her magical abilities and do good throughout the world.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)

She is a very good singer and quite good at animal taming. She has magic and wishes to learn more about it. She is a good gardener and good at baking.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)

She sometimes puts too much faith in people and can easily be betrayed because of this. She can be too kind and let people use her and mistreat her. She can be quite rash and stubborn causing her to fail or make mistakes.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)

Arlayna has long golden flaxen hair and vivid aqua-marine eyes that resemble the ocean. She wears a long flowing blue dress with gold jewelry. She is 5’11 and wears very regal and elegant clothes.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) https://gyazo.com/68d9a2f24bd6bbefdae482725c692016

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Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. That said, it has a lot of good pieces to it, and I'd encourage you to simply edit what you have. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Elves cannot leave 2,000 years. Generally, 1,000 is the maximum. For more information on the elven race, go HERE.

 

- Your power gaming and metagaming definitions are incorrect. For help with them, visit HERE.

 

- The current date on LotC is 1562. Also, May(and other normal months) do not exist on LotC. If you'd like to learn more about dates on LotC, go HERE.

 

- Magic cannot be inherited, and your character cannot apply knowing magic.

 

- Your biography requires more lore. If you need help finding lore, visit the server's wiki HERE.


Good luck on your next application!

 

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