[Denied] TNTMan60s white list applications

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What’s your Minecraft account name?: TNTMan60

How old are you?: I am 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Excessive trolling or use of memes in role play are disallowed. it just ruins the experience

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking on google for a good role play server when I came across ProbalyNotAPandas video and it interested me (video below), and it seemed really cool and something to take my mind off school and sports and To just get lost in a story that I am living in and forming

 

What is roleplaying?: Role playing is the term to define the act of playing a character as if you were them. For example Bethesda's Skyrim is a role playing game because you create the story based on how your character is. Whether they are good or evil and who they side with

 

What is metagaming?: Meta gaming is when you use outside information to get an advantage in a game. usually used in online role playing games the person in question for example might go help their friend who is getting attacked on the other side of the world when their character would have no way of knowing this.

 

What is power-emoting Power emoting is when you set an action in motion that another player cannot stop. An example would be "player 1 kills player 2" or "player 1 steal x from player 2"

 

Character’s name: Monukavas

 

Character’s sex: Male

 

Character’s race: Orc (Olog)

 

Character’s age: 45 humans years old 112.5 orc seasons

 

Biography  Born to a relatively unspectacular Olog tribe in 1403 Monukavas always wanted more then the orcanage life . like all his brothers Monukavas is violent but compered to the other Olog he is a monk with ultimate control of his emotions. After his father was killed in a war with a neighboring tribe Monukavas swore that he would kill anyone to harm him or those close to him, still a boy at 4 Monukavas was already 4 foot 6 and 180 pounds but still a boy none the less and made sure he would be ready to take revenge on his fathers killer. when the day finally came when he was fully grown at 12 he and his 7 brothers went to the tribe that had killed his father and slaughtered all of the men and taking all the women and children below 2 to train. Not liking the boring life of holding to orc tribe rules he did the most dishonorable thing an orc could do, proving he was unlike any Olog you have ever seen. He went off on his own and became a sword for hired. AT 10 feet and 420 monukavas became known as one of the deadliest men around most of the time the deciding factor in most of the battles he was in. As a hired sword he has been everywhere from the eastern isles to the World Altar of Fiandria.

 

Personality Traits: Ambitious,short tempered but calculating, Goal orientated but Pride often gets in the way, violent to those who wrong him,and no patience for non important topics or things that wont help him,

 

habits ; Excessive eating and drinking even for an orc, killing those who threaten or kill /try to kill him or those close to him,tries to think these out but instinct's of the Olog often prevent that;

 

likes good Fights, Food, drink, killing those who are against him,

Dislikes Anyone who is not paying him or have helped him

ambitions: be the Greatest Warrior ever

Strengths/Talents: fighting, strength, stamina, surprising speed for his size

Weaknesses/Inabilities: very high temper, dosnt always thinks things through, will put himself in damger for a good fight or for those he likes

Appearance: he is green with light black hair. He has purple eyes but they change red when he becomes to angry. He is on the tall side of orcs at 10 feet and weighing 420 pounds. He has an eye scar going from his jaw to the top of his head

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, Applicant;

Your application has been put on Pending for the following reasons:

 

• Your application states that your character of orcish race has purple coloured eyes. As the lore suggests, orcs can only have black, brown and rarely red coloured eyes. Please change accordingly;
• Your application suggests that your character changes eye colours when angry. This is not very realistic when magic isn't put into account, please change accordingly;
• Your character's dislikes are vague. We'd love to hear about what your character doesn't like other than people who have not helped or paid him;
• Parents dying in a war and the child swearing to have their revenge is a cliché but acceptable backstory. I personally recommend you change it, even if you necessarily don't have to;
• Killing others is not a very appropriate habit. It is acceptable, yet I'd strongly advise you to replace it with something else.

 

You have 24 hours to make the necessary changes. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any questions or concerns, via Forum PMs. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Applicant has failed to make the necessary changes in the given 24 hours of time.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[EdgyMagey 787]

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