[✗] [Pending] Gabriel's Application

[gabe345 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:mlg_boii_420

How old are you?:11

What timezone are you in?:atlantic

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Anti metagaming and powergaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I will log on after applying

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of playing a character not of yourself

What is metagaming?: Using external resources (skype, etc.) to affect the roleplaying experience

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Not being realistically fair in roleplay.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Gabriel Kidd

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Born in Felsen, along with his brother, Viktor Kidd was brought upon bring torn apart at birth, from his brother, but remembering him. He was brought into the imperial navy, where he worked as a midshipman on a Man O' War. Once he reached the age of eighteen, he resigned from the position from lieutenant and seemed to search fro his brother. Until one day a Falcon arrived to his doorstep with a letter stating Viktor's current residence, and a note that reads "My dearest brother, Gabriel; I hope this reaches you, but the envelope contains twenty two minas, and this is for a one way trip to the cloud temple docks. I wish to see you there! With hope for a good future, Viktor Kidd."

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He likes the land more than he likes water, so he would often get seasick

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He aspires to join Britannus Vanir's army, because his brother serves as a medic there.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) He is a great swordsman, and good with a bow.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) He has a fear of swimming in water (drowning basically) and he needs to work on his dicipline.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 5'8, buff, and has slightly tanned skin, from his long voyage..

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Remyy 952]

Under review.

[Remyy 952]

Pending

Your application has been put on PENDING, yet do not fret! this only means you need to change minor things so you may be accepted!

After the changes below are fixed send me a PM, you have 24 hours to edit your application.

 

• Your biography is not long enough, please make it a decent two paragraphs long. To help you do this perhaps add more lore to it!
• Your character would not remember his brother if they were separated at birth, as people do not remember things when they were born; perhaps have him find out he has a brother through other means,
• If he was in the imperial navy he would more than likely not get sea sick, and if he does get sea sick it puts a hole into as to why he even joined in the first place.
• How is he good with a bow and a sword, please add more onto your strengths AND/OR perhaps add as to why he is good with these weapons in his biography.
• How would he know his brother serves in the army if he has never met him?, give him a ambition that lines up more with his biography, AND/OR add to the biography how he knows this.
• Before you can be accepted you will need to have at least logged in once onto the server,

PM me once the changes have been made to your application, you have 24 hours to fix them.

Feel free to PM me with questions or concerns,

 

[Remyy 952]

Denied

Your application has been sadly denied.

Applicant has not fixed the pending changes that were required, next time try to fix the changes within the time frame.

You nay reapply in 12 hours.

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.