[✗] Application

[Gibbythejukebox 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Minecraft username: gibby9954

Age: 22

Timezone: Eastern Standard TIme

I am very aware that this is a PG-13 server

I have read the rules, and my most favorite rule is the "Fade to Black" rule. All rules makes sense to me.

I found out by a friend of mine, who loves to roleplay as much as me, and I have logged into the server once.

 

Definitions

Roleplaying: Is the acting out/proformance of a play or event. This can be with a character, who is fictional, and might have other traits that are not related to the gamer what so ever.

Metagaming: Is the process in which one goes out the games way to make things happen, that are not following the games rules. Example, " I make my self king, who transcends over all kings." Another player, "How can you do that, your not a royal, and have not even passed the kings test."

Power-emoting: Is the process in which someone forces an action. Example, " I swing my sword and hit your leg."

 

In-Character Information

Character name: Jeffery Neuran

Sex: Male

Race: Dark Elf

Age:74

Biography: In the year 1493, Jeffery Neuran was born, in the cave system of Anni'sul. About a year later after Jeffery birth,1494, the ruins of Leyulin was invaded by the Silver Enclave of the Haelun'or and the Reformed Kingdom of Oren. As Jeffery's mother fear the worst. The civil war broke out between the wood and high elves. As the dark elves stay neutral, but soon after that. The high elves left out of their own town. As the civil war was happening, Jeffery was undergoing hand-to-hand combat training, at the age of 9. As the civil war came to the end, the cave system collapsed and destroying the whole dark elf home.

This force Jeffery and his family to move to Cer'lin the newly-constructed wood elven city. When Jeffery turn 17, his father gifted him his grandfather blade, which was engraved with the family crest. In 1510 the martial law was enacted to Protectorate of Haelun'or after an illegal coup had occurred. As Jeffery aged, he begin to learn various jobs; like leatherworking, blacksmithing, and even stonemason. He learn most of it from his, father and mother. When Jeffery turn 20, in 1513, the Orc-Dwarf War came to an end. A few months later a giant worm destroyed most of Athera, which lead to Jeffery moving again to The Isles of Vailor.

Personality Traits: Likes watching the nature and going for walks, mediation. Dislikes snakes and anything creepy.

Ambitions: To be the best blacksmith of the land.

Strengths: Being a great role model.

Weakness: Speech, and bartering.

Appearance: Skin: dark with a purple hue. Hair: white, with white hair tassels. Height:6' 2" Eyes: Red.

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is off.

 

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-Your character's biography literally skips over half of your characters life, ceasing when he is 20 years old.

 

-Your character's biography is a bit incoherent, and hard to udnerstand places. Try to proofread it.

 

-Your character's skills, weaknesses, and ambitions dont make much sense when compared with the rest of your character's biography.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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