Mikk5683 3rd application

[Moob 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Mikk5683

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Denmark

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yeah im one of the best in class

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im a 14 year old boy who lves to play minecraft which i do most i speak great english and ive been rping irl fantasy roleplay also DnD which i love also ive been playing on wow rp servers. ehmm if im accepted to the server i will be online alot

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: probaly 2-8 hours maybe more in the weekends

-How long have you played minecraft?: since alpha 1.2 (the day before beta)

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know alot about roleplaying and ive been roleplaying for 5 years i think

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i think its gonna be awesome and great rp in it

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: im plaing on imdeity im leaving it because of lack of rp

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes i have

-Name the 4 races on this server. human, dwarf, elf, orc

-How did you hear about us?: i found you on the forums

-Did you vote?: yes i did on all 3 websites

-What was your favourite Law?: i love the rule with the skins that i need to have a rp skin to join

-What was your least favourite Law?: ehmm i dont think i have one

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Sign in id is Mikk5683 display name is Moob

In-Character:

-Character Name: Hagor Silentstep (in game name mikk5684)

-What is your Race?: Human (is it the most populated race?)

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: mikk5683

-Biography: Im Hagor of the Silentstep family i come from a family generation of thieves and assasins. it was in my blood so i had to continue my familys legacy of thieving and sometimes assasinating. but other things that stealing from people i am always up for a fight against evil monsters or other people who wants to fight with me. But when your born into a family of thieves its kind of the what youre gonna be yourself i was taught how to be a thief as a very young boy and i have been a thief since then. (im not gonna steal from peoples chest and stuff just so you know)

-Character Age: 35

-Character Appearance: My character is a shady kind of type he has a mask covering one half of his face and he has a brown shirt on with a hood on and he has grey pants on , he has a iron sword on his back

-Character Personality: he isnt always the happiest character hes kinda on his own and wants to be on his own so he dosnt really talk much

-Your ambitions: get alot of money and just be happy

-Can your character read or write?: he can read and write a bit

-Can your character mine?: Sometimes but he dosnt always want to mine

-Are you a capable builder? Yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes very well and fast

-Enjoy Farming?: no my character would never farm

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is good at sneaking around so people dont see him

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/my-thief-assasin-skin/

-Other Information: not really anymore

[Karon 5]

I am not a member of the staff nor do I got accepted/denied yet, but I would suggest doing the title of each sub-information in bold so you can read the text much better. You also should write what specific you know about RP'ing, I've read alot of apps that god denied because this specific part was not answered correctly.

Left to you if you want to change this stuff or not, but I would recommend it.

[Neri 3590]

I am not a member of the staff nor do I got accepted/denied yet, but I would suggest doing the title of each sub-information in bold so you can read the text much better. You also should write what specific you know about RP'ing, I've read alot of apps that god denied because this specific part was not answered correctly.

Left to you if you want to change this stuff or not, but I would recommend it.

This.

Also, you need to make your bio longer, or if you'd rather not, add more detail to your "Skills" Section;

-Your ambitions: get alot of money and just be happy

Why? What do you want to buy if you are rich? Friends? Estate? Weapons? A Army?

-Can your character read or write?: he can read and write a bit

Did someone teach you? Did you teach yourself? Do you write for fun, to write stories, or something else? Does he write in a floral or more practical script?

-Can your character mine?: Sometimes but he dosnt always want to mine

Why not? Try expanding this.

Is your character afraid of the darkness or danger of mining? Do you just hate being underground? This is a chance to expand your character somewhat.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes

What do you like building? Public buildings, your own house, or do you like building as a job? Also, you could say what your favourite building material is, for instance

"I'm a Elvish architect, but i like building with Sandstone. It's a fantastically versatile material!"

-Can you wield a sword?: yes very well and fast

You can wield a sword fast? Fix this.

Also, you could say how you learnt it and why you fight with your sword. To protect your friends, or because you enjoy killing?

-Enjoy Farming?: no my character would never farm

Why not? Expand on this.

Also, check your grammar and spelling. Re-posting your app is meant for improvement, not getting attention.

Good luck getting accepted!

[NekoDanie 346]

Denied.

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/