[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Lona Raylen Character

[AlphaBlox 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information

 

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:AlphaBlox

How old are you?:9

What timezone are you in?:WA

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes I am very aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Combat rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Server lists

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes

 

 

Definitions

 

 

What is roleplaying?:A source of talking in a whole new person and a whole new world, You create your character icluding its name, age, and history of them, and you roleplay like this:

Tom: Hello, i'm gonna head to the campfire soon, wanna come?

Tyler: Of course! coming!

What is metagaming?: Doing things your person cannot do, Like texting some friends, Like this:

You: Hey I need some help, I am getting attacked by ten humans, and I they are too powerful.

Them: Ok I will be right there Mike and jeff are coming too.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Instant killing, Like Tyson Cleanly slices off Her arm, That is powergaming, The correct way is Tyson Attempts to cleanly slice her arm

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Lona Raylen

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)25

Biography (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)Lives in Laurelin, Lona's Family was hard working in a little cottage. one day Lona's father, Kylet Raylen, traveled across over to Salvus. Traveled From Laurelen, Across to Lorraine, then through Felsen, Traveled to Courland, ended up in Salvus. It was a two - month adventure, Lona's mother, Torlohen Raylen, They were working hard, they were expecting Kylet to come home after the two months. they waited for a year, he never came, Sure he was dead, They were very sad, until the middle of summer, did he return. they were happy tears, trickling down their eyes and dripping off their chin. Kylet told them that He learned carving, he said he was so into it, he forgot, this summer he realized that it was way over the time, so he returned. He then taught Lona Raylen to carve. Lona was born in 1544, In their little cottage.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Loves to carve in a nook in a tree, Loves writing about stuff, Loves drawing, Has a habit of going to their farm and munching on carrots, and going to the animals to to feed them, A Love for reading, also, And dislikes The look of dead things, Hates it, Disgusting, Is very nice Funny, good to have a laugh with, Fun, A good social elf.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A traveler And carve only the nicest of carving and make books, and paintings of dream.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Talents are Carving And writing And a strength of getting the best things out of cranky and mean sellers who wants to sell you bad things and a very good swordswoman.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Needs to work on Inspiring people and A weakness of Very very cranky and mean people.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Blonde hair a brown headband amd stands 7feet.

Skin:http://imgur.com/yvkEm5h

 

Edited August 5, 2016 by AlphaBlox
Fixed some things Like adding periods and Definition updates.

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

You application is pretty good, there are just a few things you need to change.

 

-Please try to work on your definitions as they are not entirely correct.  Here are some helpful links!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

-Please try to improve your grammar in your biography.  It does not have to be perfect but try to fix it up and make it look as clean as possible, as this server relies heavily on writing.

 

You have 24 hours to make the necessary changes.  If you have any questions or concerns please feel free to message me here on the forums!  I am always happy to help!  

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

Absolutely great work on your application - I had a very fun experience reading it over and could tell you put a lot of effort into it.

 

You should be implemented by a GM in a few hours, maximum. Feel free to browse the forums and check out our guides!

If you need any help or would like to be mentored, feel free to PM me or find me in game!

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

[TakeMeT0TheFae 970]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.